Had a quick look at 1:15 with a view to reposting with the 'correct' ending.
Oh.
Looks like there is a lot more proof-reading needing to be done.
Consequently, I'm going to proof-read the whole of Book One in order before getting into the edits and uploading of Book Two. This is, I know, a delay, but it will mean that I have a much better hold of how my characters act and think and speak going into Book Two, so it will be for the best.
Looking at 1:!5, they seem so young, now, given I know where they are three months later when their lives are a lot more complex.
For now, then, it's time to load up typewriter fonts and coloured backdrops on 1:1...
Cheers...Clee