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Wilhelm Chapter 1 repost

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For those of you who notice these things, Chapter One just got reposted to fix an error we all missed.

Throughout the story it is established that Luke's Mum was not happy with him going into town on his own. In a later chapter he has to get special dispensation so he can arrange to go meet up with Leri.

But.

In Chapter One he walks into the story, home from town, where he'd been on his own.

Oops.

There's now a line of dialogue from Stef about this confirming he'd been given permission to go shopping on his own because he wanted to spend his birthday money.

Memto to self: more coffee.

Clee

 

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