First - To Ndogo Devushki - Welcome to the madhouse. I enjoyed Katherine Lynne and think that it would make a very good prologue to a longer story, no matter how long it takes to write.
To all new authors, especially Ndogo Devushki - As a relatively new author (I started two years ago) I highly recommend that you turn on the comments when submitting a story or at least put an email address on your author's page. (I created a separate email address used solely for communications from SOL readers and authors. Omachuck @ AOL.COM). This time, I had no other way to reach you, hence this open note.
Excepting a very few jerks who don't know the word 'polite' this is a very welcoming and helpful community. The feedback you receive - even the negative - will help you become a better author. Trust me on this.
Even better, you would probably receive offers to edit and/or proof, something every author needs.