Chapter 21 has been submitted to the queue. I'd hoped to get two chapters posted this go around. Unfortunately this chapter took a lot out of me posting as I'm sure you'll understand when you read it. Obviously more is yet to come. Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated, for those who have provided it so far. I've got an editor request submitted, so with a little luck I'll get more eyes to help look things over and improve things soon. I try to do a good job with my writing, but I know I have my errors that slip through the cracks.