The next chapter is in the submission queue, so hopefully it'll be live soon.
This time round, Luke and Stef go shopping, Luke for swim trunks, and Stef for bikinis and underwear, with Luke gaining a whole new concept demonstrated, the 'mirror selfie', as taken in the changing rooms.
And The Thing he bought keeps making noises...
NB: This is where things start moving, though so far the sex is offstage...
As I'm self-editing and self-proofing (yeah, I know) if anyone spots any goofs, please let me know.
Cheers...CH