Folks - Look for the story Retribution by new-to-SOL author, Thornfoote. It should post starting the evening of Monday, August 14. I won't say much except that it is a finished story; I like it; and that it is unusual, funny, and entertaining.
Full disclosure - I was one of several who helped proof and edit.
Try it. Give him feedback - he has a sequel planned if he gets enough encouragement.