In Chapter 5 we find out if the family will have one or two Heroes. Melody is made happy, and Soo-Min tries to put a move on Pēteris.
Voting: The update of feedback so far is -
* Emails and comments are positive. Specific likes were appreciated.
* One blatant and serious typo that a gazillion proof readings didn't catch. (Thanks for catching and reporting it.)
* After chapter two the score went over 8.0 then after chapter three dropped back to 7.75. I can't tell if that was content or length - there are indications of both. Please vote and comment or email after you read Chapter 4. It will really help me.
Some of you know that I am one of Number 7's proof readers. I just got a new chapter to review. Look for him to post soon.