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I posted "Surprise!" a couple of days ago. I was very tired and I think the tequila did some of the editing.
I have paid attention to some of the comments, and the corrections were spot on, so I have reposted the story! Let's see if this works better.
At this point I know I said it was a flash story, but I'm thinking there might be another chapter in me....somewhere....someplace....maybe.
Hey, I was going to post a bonus story for Easter, but got it and chapter 10 of The Strawberry Patch reversed.
Rather than cause issues, I let Ch 10 post today and the Bonus Story - The Wives Descriptions - will post Sunday. The wives description, is just that. Several readers have asked about them, so I wrote this flash piece.
Have a blessed holiday weekend be it Easter or Passover.
Having an editor work with me for the past few stories has been wonderful!
The experience of finishing Xalir's DreamWeaver and now having someone check my work on The Strawberry Patch Book 3 has inspired me to go back and check my earlier stories with fresh eyes and a more discerning style of writing.
I just reposted "Don't Get Mad" and it seems to flow better and is less clunky than the original. I feel like a modern man redoing the things a neanderthal had done.
I'll post notices here everytime I finish a redo of a story. If you have the time and inkling to read the stories over again, feel free to comment on the upgraded story.
Except for that "You STILL suck" thing.
Wednesday morning the final chapter of "Another Dark And Stormy Night" will post.
As I thought, many wrote to me and posted messages in the story, wondering when the heck the story was going to pick up.
Over Chapters 7-8-9-10 the scores climbed. I don't sweat the score, except that it can serve as an indicator of how a story is received.
Thanks for the nice votes. I hope the people who gave it an initial score of 5 might come back and rethink their number.
The next new story will be coming soon. It will have a lot more sexual content.
And of course, in the mean time, "The Strawberry Patch:Book 3 - Life On The Savannah" is currently in the midst of its run.
Thank you for your readership.
I've been on a slow build with the story and some of you have been a bit impatient.
I post a story once per week and people complain that it isn't often enough. Then I post daily and people say that it is too slow. Wow!
To those who wrote to me, adding to my collection of corrections, thank you very much. I've gone through the chapters posted and reposted them with the corrections. I also went through the chapters to come and fixed the 's issue and the double space issue and the bad writing issue (I think).
Everything will begin to pick up in a day or two, so thank you for your readership and for caring to write to me. I appreciate you.
OH! I also have had several requests for a story with more sex. All I can say to that is that it is cumming!
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