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Scary leap to ask for opinions on changing the series title from Unleashed to...
(link here: https://storiesonline.net/n/43978/unleashed-a-challenging-day )
Reason: at first, I thought the direction of the story would go towards a single incident where Polana unleashes her desires, but being a pantsy, the character stole the story and made it go in a different direction and then other stories surfaced concerning the main character and sub-characters where Unleashed seemed less and less representative of the multiple story series. So, since I am only partially through the first story, I figured I would change the overall series title.
Thoughts: I liked the simple one-word series title, simple minds, simple thoughts, I guess.
Scary: Will anyone answer??? What's the expression - I looked into the void and nothing stared back - well, I asked for advice from the multitude and nothing came back - sums up my fears.
If you have an opinion, please send a note with your suggestion and thoughts. (including - you're a dumbass, don't change it).
So far, my ideas:
Enhanced - simple, but I think there are already 1.2 billion books with this title
Augmented - I like the idea of hinting at augmented breasts, penises, but seems like only half a title
Amplified - too musical, and I suck at singing
Intensified - I like the idea of the world intensifying around our heroes and their natural abilities getting intensified, but maybe too much of an adjective.
Enlarged - too simple but also too mundane, but I like the sexual overtures and implications.
Unleashed - what I have now seems like the wrong direction.
If you have any other ideas, please send them. If there is nothing else, it will make me feel that someone has read at least part of this.
Note: I didn't think amazing, stupendous, spectacular words would work - Spider-Man already stole them.
Additional Stories (partially written or in final editing - working titles):
Jennifer and Cindy with the Principal (Lesbian with some more backstory)
After School Shopping (a look at the world from a shopping perspective - ie, more public stuff)
Jealous Much (School event)
The Final Fight Begins (Polana graduation test)
Dead Testing Days (Physical Testing for Polana and crew)
The Death of Tyler (and ramifications)
I have a new Job (Polana's new job)
In the Military (Polana gets drafted)
Roshana decides to get Popular (Polana helps Roshana - basically a stroke story)
The Six Soldiers (Polana and five other soldiers on assignment)
Zer and the dog of a boyfriend (Polana's sister)
After some very kind words from readers, I have restarted the Growing Up storyline. A new book, that gets dark, very dark, before the light...(Arriving May 1st)
I will publish as a new story (would love to go back and edit the other one, but time's short).
You will notice the odd short story, or series, more just for fun and to try and improve my writing.
The Unleashed series will expand with more stories, enjoying Polana's journey.
Any feedback, good or bad, I love, appreciate, and now know why so many authors crave feedback. The void exists, and the odd shout keeps writers writing.
Oh, and Buy Me a Coffee - https://buymeacoffee.com/tmax_improper_stories
I am still writing :) - I have a new series that will arrive on Jan 31, with publishing every 2 weeks (opposite of the catholic school series). There are 23 chapters for the first story (more serial). More science fiction as it takes place in a different timeline with North America split into multiple countries. Students are enhanced, but of course, it focuses on a strong teenage girl and her challenging day. Girl with girl, some public (in school), and finishes with males in female. Already I have a spin-off and chapters written for other parts of the universe (I enjoy writing it).
As always, please send feedback - even thumbs up or thumbs down helps remind me that others read this. If you feel generous, you can buy me a coffee (though I am trying to cut back on caffeine :) - https://buymeacoffee.com/tmax_improper_stories
Finally, if you want further stories in any of the universes already started, I would love to keep exploring them. This writing thing is addictive and the more I do, the more I want to do.
Special thanks to Mark Friend - you rock for editing my stories.
So, I have joined the digital age and set up a buy me a coffee page (in profile). My love of caffeine battled and overcame my Luddite tendencies. No pressure. No caffeine means sleep, so...either I write or I dream of writing. Either way, I win!!!
I have uploaded for posting a new series - about Catholic Schoolgirls - yeah, not many sex stories about that group of people :). I originally thought to have lots of raunchy sex stuff as the girls learn about 'the sex'. However, as I am currently a pantsy writer (write by the seat of the pants - or shorts because it's warm here), the characters took over the stories. I found it lots of fun to explore different writing types - so the series will have crazy stupid sex stuff, emotionally hard things, and even one story with no sex (only kissing - the most emotionally satisfying).
I hope people enjoy the series as much as I enjoyed writing it and people enjoy discovering the hidden world of people.
Currently 5 stories, more published every second Friday, 17 in total.
Of note: I will likely have improperly used terms and/or common experiences - I did not go to catholic school and am not a teenage girl. If I have made a gross error that causes you to fall out of the story, please send a note. I did lots of research, and while I know that the internet is 99% accurate, that 1% may creep in :)
Thank you for reading this.
Further, for the admins and the community, thank you for being awesome. Deciding to write was very daunting, but the support from the site and the community has helped me confront the fears I didn't realize I had :)
Cheers,
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