Unleashed: Halloween Tradition
by TMax
Copyright© 2025 by TMax
Horror Story: Based on The Lottery by Shirley Jackson. An existential horror short story.
The morning of Oct 31st broke clear and sunny, with the fresh coolness of a full-fall day, as the bugs buzzed and the trees had green, yellow, and red leaves, the people of the district began to gather on the football field, between the enhanced finishing school and the endless forest, around ten o’clock. Some districts had so many women that the lottery had to begin before dawn, but this district, with only about three hundred females, the whole lottery took only two hours, so it could begin at ten o’clock in the morning and still finish by the required noon time, which also allowed everyone time to get ready and participate in Halloween sundown events.
The older ladies, grandmothers mostly, assembled first, of course. Most had woken up early to bake and dress for the event. They tended to gather quietly for a while before they set up tables and filled them with baked goods. They talked about their families, the latest divorces, deaths, and newly discovered recipes. Mrs. Martin had already evaluated the other desserts and had begun her criticisms of size, shape, color, and texture. Other ladies joined in the conversation, the reviews critical, pointed, and though not well received, the other ladies accepted and apologized for their inferior desserts. Mrs. Jones, mother to the school’s mathematics teacher, and Mrs. Delacroix, who others pronounced Dellacroy, had arranged the baked goods onto separate tables of cookies, cakes, jelly bowls, muffins, squares, and a small, ugly table with miscellaneous baked goods, that caused, both exclamations of delight, and tsk’s of shame.
Middle-aged women, mothers, stood off to the side and gossiped about husbands and lovers. The daughters, aged between ten and early twenties, stood between the two groups and talked about their mothers, their fathers, and who cheated on whom. Awkward, in groups of one, two, or three, and closest to the forest, stood the in-between women, late twenties, with no husbands, either because they hadn’t captured one yet, or only dated other women.
Soon the three officials arrived, the District Representative, as old as the older ladies, in a short, black, cocktail dress, with inappropiate high heels, but no one would comment, as her missing right arm scared everyone, the District Secretary, as young as the daughters, in a sleeveless white and yellow flowered sundress, with sensible sandals, and the District Financial advisor, mother aged, in a dark blue power dress suit and black dress shoes. The representative and secretary talked, mostly about politics, but also about the size of the gathering, the largest in their memory.
Mothers walked to their mothers, and daughters shuffled to the family, linked arms with the grandmothers, while their mothers scowled at their revealing clothing. Mrs. Martin discreetly waved for her daughter, and the nearby women pretended not to notice. Mrs. Summers hissed at her daughter, Kelly, who refused to look at her mother, but left her friend for her favorite and only remaining grandmother.
The District Representative conducted the lottery, her primary duty, while the other two officials supervised. The Financial Advisor held a cardboard box with ripped, festive, Halloween wrapping on it. The same one from last year and the year before, but different from the official black plastic one that someone ran over with their car years ago. The secretary coughed twice, waited for most of the conversation to stop, coughed again, and gestured at the representative.
“It’s time,” the representative said as she glanced at her gold watch with a cracked crystal face. The other women kept their distance from the trio and the tables with the baked goods. For years, various people suggested bands, or music, or grand speeches before the event, but no one had time to organize it. Instead, they focused on Halloween later in the day. Five years ago, a young girl who aspired to a singing career had sung an acapella version of a current pop song. No one had clapped or cheered, except her best friend. Initially, the government issued plastic coins for the lottery, but someone lost them, years ago, so the secretary just used square paper pieces. Each year, after the lottery, Mrs. Jones suggested that the secretary re-order new coins, but with a year to prepare, the to-do task slipped until not enough time remained for a shipment to arrive, and they vowed to do it next year.
Before the representative could give the instructions, a black SUV drove over the gravel pathway and stopped on the grass at the far end of the field. Only the representative glanced at it, as everyone else only acknowledged the oppressive vehicle’s presence with a slight turn away, and continued to stare at the advisor and the black and orange pumpkin-covered box. “Must have encountered traffic,” Mrs. Delacroix said to her best friend, Mrs. Hutchinson, who stifled a snort and nodded, because every district held the same event, and except for deliveries, no cars traveled on the roadways. “Thought they would want to get here early, to scope the girls,” Mrs. Delacroix went on, “and maybe try to rig the results. But I guess it’s all the same to them.” Mrs. Hutchinson nodded and squeezed her granddaughter’s hand. The blonde girl glanced at her grandmother, smiled, and squeezed back. Her third lottery, and she had spent yesterday in the kitchen with her grandmother making special cookies, orange icing topped with hand-piped cute white ghosts. “They’re in time, though, they haven’t even put in the damn paper in yet. What the hell’s the hold up?” Mrs. Hutchinson whispered back.
The Financial Advisor stared at the secretary, who beamed out at the group, pleased with the attention. The whispers of the crowd grew in volume, “Get on with it”, “I gots stuff to do”, “Always wasting our time”. Many agreed, nodded, and shuffled to relieve stiff hips and sore legs. A few younger girls sat down, only to have their mothers pull them up, while their grandmothers scolded their mothers, as if that didn’t happen every year, and hadn’t happened to them.
“Attention,” the representative said, with hands up for attention, “guess we better get started, get this over with, so everyone can enjoy the wonderful baked goods and get back to Halloween preparations. Everyone here?”
“Dunbar,” several women said. “Dunbar, Dunbar.”
The representative consulted her phone, scrolled down, until her face went white, “Cynthia Dunbar,” she said, “passed away last night, in her sleep.” The middle-aged ladies gasped. Mrs. Dunbar had organized the original lottery, the first district representative. Before today, they associated her with the lottery. Some called it the Dunbar lottery. The older ladies had already suspected the news when she hadn’t greeted them, as she always arrived first. Only her husband still lived in the family, and the other ladies made mental notes to wrap up some food to help with his grief.
“All those eligible to draw, please form a line,” the representative said and pointed to the box that the advisor waved around above her head. Mothers and grandmothers hugged, kissed, and hand-squeezed the younger girls, who murmured and whispered as they gathered in a line with small globs of friends. Older women fussed and straightened the line.
“Everyone alphabetically, by last name,” the representative said as she stared at her list.
Becky Anderson, twelve, shouted, “You’re in the wrong spot, stupid, I’m ahead of you,” to Annabelle Hudson, eleven, who shouted back, “Are not, A comes before B, dummy.”
The two pushed each other until Mrs. Hudson said, “You’re embarrassing your grandmother,” grabbed Annabelle’s ear, and dragged her between Sally Henderson, twenty-three, and Eloise Hutchenson, fourteen. The line slowly straightened and quieted.
“Well,” the Representative said, “guess everyone’s lined up. Did Ellen Watson and Greta Billings make it? It’s their first.”
“Here,” Greta, ten, said and waved her hand.
“Yes,” Mrs. Watson said from the back of the line, beside the other ten-year-old, so short that she only looked eight.
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