ProfessorC: Blog

Chapter 4 should be up very shortly.

I've just had my first non=positive comment. Not negative, just someone expressing his perfectly rational view that there is too much detail in the story making it impossible to get past the first three pages. Whether this person feels that stories on SOL should just consist of a long succession of very explicit descriptions of sexual acts or otherwise is unclear sincde he merely criticises in general terms, but it would be interesting to hear what level of detail is appropriate in a story

I've submitted chapter 3 nd it should be up shortly.

I have submitted chapter 2, which has not yet been through editing. It is short, but sets up some circumtances for later parts.

I've just submitted an edited version of chapter one. Just a few formatting changes and added the odd bit of description.