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Levels of detail

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I've just had my first non=positive comment. Not negative, just someone expressing his perfectly rational view that there is too much detail in the story making it impossible to get past the first three pages. Whether this person feels that stories on SOL should just consist of a long succession of very explicit descriptions of sexual acts or otherwise is unclear sincde he merely criticises in general terms, but it would be interesting to hear what level of detail is appropriate in a story

Chapter 3 is in the queue for posting

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I've submitted chapter 3 nd it should be up shortly.

Posted unedited version of Chapter 2. Comments welcome.

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I have submitted chapter 2, which has not yet been through editing. It is short, but sets up some circumtances for later parts.

Edited version of chapter one posted, chapter two tomorrow.

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I've just submitted an edited version of chapter one. Just a few formatting changes and added the odd bit of description.

New at this game

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Hi there I'm kind of new at this game so please, be gentle with me. I'm aiming to post two to three chapters a week, and I hope that as you come to know them, you get to like my characters as much as I do. Most (but not all) of the incidents and happenings in my stories (there will be more than one) happened, either to me or to someone I know, just not necessarily to the people concerned, or at the time depicted. Also, if there's anyone out there with editing proff reading experience who wants to hop aboard, please let me know.

 

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