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Chapter 5 is proving a difficut child to give birth to, so sadly won't be up before Monday. I finally two years ago was handed a reson to celebrate December 25th that I could go with. My youngest grandchild was born on that day. Furthermore his mother had an excellent sense of timing, he was born four days after hr borthday. This followd her earlier productions who appeared respectively, four daus after my birthday and four days after her mothers.
Furthermore, this youngest member of the clan, is Jewish, was born on December twenty fifth, his mother's name is Mary and he is called (in hebrew) Jeshua.
So Happy birthday to all the Jeshuas around the world on Monday.
I've just had my first non=positive comment. Not negative, just someone expressing his perfectly rational view that there is too much detail in the story making it impossible to get past the first three pages. Whether this person feels that stories on SOL should just consist of a long succession of very explicit descriptions of sexual acts or otherwise is unclear sincde he merely criticises in general terms, but it would be interesting to hear what level of detail is appropriate in a story
I've submitted chapter 3 nd it should be up shortly.
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