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Ellen's grandson Corey comes to Albuquerque to play baseball against the University of New Mexico. Ellen asks him to stay the weekend with him. Ellen goes to the game with Duffy. She stops off at her house so Corey can take a shower. They have dinner at Mananan's, Duffy's Tavern.
I have just celebrated my 84th birthday. I'm in excellent health but you never know what the future brings.
So I am rereading all of my stories and with the help of Grammarly am reediting and reworking them.
As originally posted the story was nine chapters. The new version is eleven chapters. While there is no new content the chapters have been shortened and submitted as part of a new chapter. I am quite happy with the result. I figure it's time to make sure that what I leave here is as complete and well-written as possible.
Characters in Breaking the Mold also find themselves in Duffy's Tavern, where Tony consoles his widowed mother by making use of the sex lessons she gave him as a teenager.
Chapter 4. Ellen's son from Colorado Springs visits. Reminiscing they talk about the time she acted as his sexual mentor, which leads to a passionate redo.
I have reread and re-edited using Grammarly making it more error free and more easily readable. Chapter three was part of the other two but I have streamlined the story with more readable chapters. My intention is to carry it forward and bring Tony Firestone (a principal character in "Breaking the Mold") Ellen's son.
Thank you for your continued interest in my writing.
Peter Duncan
I have been advised that Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 are the same. I have reposted Chapter 4 to its correct version.
I apologize for the mix-up.
Kindest regards,
Peter Duncan
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