P. Tango: Blog

I've updated the three chapters, mostly fixing grammar issues -I'm not a native English-speaker, as you can surmise- and added a few lines to close plot holes. Chapter 4 will arrive at the end of the month or so.

Regards

I've taken into account several comments and in a few days I will repost a revised, improved version of the three chapters. I also want to thank Sarkasmus for his invaluable help and suggestions.

First of all, sorry by the long hiatus. It has been a hard year and real life had to take priority over fantasy.

Chapter 3 is longer than the previous ones and will try to post regularly.

BTW, thanks everybody for your comments, specially the "what reader knows/what character knows" bit. That's something I hadn't thought about and will try to correct it in the next chapter.

Also, I've started another multi-chapter story. Will upload the first chapter soon.

Hope you like it.

Yes, the story has no resolution. That's because frankly I cannot see a resolution. Was there cheating? Yes, but it was part of the job. Does it matter? Of course. Does it matter to HER? Can a person who turns her tween child into a cold-blooded killer even know what love is? Doubtful. What happens with the newly-orphaned child? Can Jake climb out of the deep well of despair he's trapped now? So many questions, and no idea how to address them.

So, it's a dud. I wanted to remove the story as soon as I saw it published, but there is no removal option in the Authors dashboard.