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She's Kara Fleek
https://karafleek.wordpress.com/
I recommend her to anybody who is into extreme slavery.
BTW, as soon as I finish my degree thesis in May will resume work on my incomplete stories.
Take care.
I've updated the three chapters, mostly fixing grammar issues -I'm not a native English-speaker, as you can surmise- and added a few lines to close plot holes. Chapter 4 will arrive at the end of the month or so.
Regards
I've taken into account several comments and in a few days I will repost a revised, improved version of the three chapters. I also want to thank Sarkasmus for his invaluable help and suggestions.
First of all, sorry by the long hiatus. It has been a hard year and real life had to take priority over fantasy.
Chapter 3 is longer than the previous ones and will try to post regularly.
BTW, thanks everybody for your comments, specially the "what reader knows/what character knows" bit. That's something I hadn't thought about and will try to correct it in the next chapter.
Also, I've started another multi-chapter story. Will upload the first chapter soon.
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