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First of all, sorry by the long hiatus. It has been a hard year and real life had to take priority over fantasy.
Chapter 3 is longer than the previous ones and will try to post regularly.
BTW, thanks everybody for your comments, specially the "what reader knows/what character knows" bit. That's something I hadn't thought about and will try to correct it in the next chapter.
Also, I've started another multi-chapter story. Will upload the first chapter soon.
Yes, the story has no resolution. That's because frankly I cannot see a resolution. Was there cheating? Yes, but it was part of the job. Does it matter? Of course. Does it matter to HER? Can a person who turns her tween child into a cold-blooded killer even know what love is? Doubtful. What happens with the newly-orphaned child? Can Jake climb out of the deep well of despair he's trapped now? So many questions, and no idea how to address them.
So, it's a dud. I wanted to remove the story as soon as I saw it published, but there is no removal option in the Authors dashboard.
I know the end may not be the one most people expected, but I think it's the right one.
Now I will continue with the second story.
Thanks by the feedback, everybody. I've been told the story is going too slow, that there is not enough sex.
Well, yes to both. It's going slow because the characters have too many things to say. And there is not enough sex scenes because, although it's an incest story, sex is not the focus. There will be some sex scenes, but only to advance the story.
BTW, I will wait to post the third story until one of the current two is finished.
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