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Sometimes I get ideas in my head that maybe only work as a paragraph.
They seem too short to post as stories, so I am asking if anyone knows a more suitable place to post them?
I'm always grateful for comments on or reviews of my stories, but am unable to comment on or review others? Can anyone explain what I'm doing wrong?
Also I can't take part in the discussion forum either.
Help please x
This is in a very different style to my other story due to it coming from a very different place and not an actual fantasy of my own.
I once chatted to someone who was given a similar invitation as to Alice in my story. She wisely didn't take it up, but it made me think about what some young women may be letting themselves in for in such a situation. Quite a risk. This was intended as a warning.
I found it quite difficult to write. The events are intended to be disorientating due to the pills and alcohol and Alice's growing trepidation. Originally I was going to end it in the street as she left the cinema, alone, practically naked and with no means to get home, but as a mother I felt I had to see her home in one piece at least.
I'd be very interested in reading others thoughts in if I have been successful in this.
Thank you
Mina x
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