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I've been told that my story description is no longer accurate from when I first started my story a while back. I really need to give a better overview, so I thought I would put the story so far and ask for input.

THE WITNESS PROGRAM

Takes place over two weeks in April. Harriet is the model housewife, 38 with two school age children and a successful husband. She is seduced by a younger black guy on the street who makes her part of an online interracial sex site. Harriet is both shocked but sexually awakened by this. She becomes a willing partner and addicted to the secrecy and excitement of it all, before crashing to the ground and falling pregnant.

THE CALL OF THE WILD

August. Four months later Harriet has had a termination and Witness has moved away, but she still has the overwhelming desire for sex with others. She visits a dogging spot where she meets a couple and strikes up a friendship with the woman Angela.

HANNAH

September. A sidestep into the thoughts of Harriet's teenage daughter and the impact that Harriet's obsession is having.

SONS AND MOTHERS

September. Harriet visits Angela and discovers her very open sexual lifestyle. She is introduced to a swinging website.

ANGEL'S DELIGHT

October. Harriet visits a young woman from the swinging website and has an unusual experience that leads her to frustration and a small emotional breakdown.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DEAREST

October. It's Harriet's 39th birthday and her plans are disrupted by a surprise from her husband. She persuades him into indulging in outdoor sex, against his judgement, but leads to a positive outcome bringing them closer. But Harriet is still hungry for more.

WHERE NEXT?

I have some ideas, but am always grateful for feedback and comments. How best can I describe the series as a whole?

I don't think it was the small reference to beastiality that was the issue for some with my last Harriet story. I think that her having sex with her husband was a bigger issue! Where will she go next I wonder.

My punctuation style (which is how I was taught at school) has also been raised a number of times. I'll see if I can adapt to expectations.

My latest entry to Harriet's story is getting very low scores and I'm afraid I may have included something that people didn't like. I had hoped I was steering her in a good direction.

If it was the reference to beastiality then I'm sorry, but the story has no beastiality in it and I wasn't going in that direction anyway. It was just to show the differences between Harriett's and Angela's lives and situations.

I hope you all keep reading and please let me know what you like.

Mx

Sorry for the wait, but the latest Harriet story is now available. I hope you all like it.

Where would you all like the story to go? I have some ideas for her further sexual adventures, but I always like to move the story on at the same time, and I am at a crossroads of where to go next.

Please let me know what has worked well and what hasn't. I did enjoy writing the short story about Hannah and the different perspective that it gave, but it doesn't seem to have been very popular so it would be good to know what you all think about her story so far.

Thank you

Mx

As some of you have asked, the last entry in my Harriet story, Angel's Delight, is not the end. There is more to come.

It's just that Harriet did need that emotional release after months of build up.

Comments and messages welcome and reviews would be nice :)

I hope you go on reading.

Mx