Liz-n-Rick: Blog

is in the queue for posting. I would love some feedback on how readers liked it. I've got chapter 2 written, and my better half is making minor adjustments to the plot. Look for it this time next week.

Regarding Vengeance, I'm putting that on hold so I can get more chapters of Eldest Son out quicker.

Thanks for sticking with me and I hope you enjoy my work...

My better half is going to take over outlining Project" Eldest Son for me. He's more knowledgable when it comes to this kind of thing. The roles and characters aren't changing in the least, just the actions through out the storyline. I changed the pen name so that he can get some credit for his input, because without it, I can tell you that Dominic's Heroes would have been VERY boring. I know a good bit about the military, but he spent 17 years living out of a 'duffle bag"

As far as the next book, Eldest Son chapter one is getting a rewrite for the ending. The proofreader use said "it was cluttered and it felt very rushed." So please be patient, it will be worth it, I promise. I'm thinking middle of the week for the first chapter pending real life doesn't slap me in the face.

Thanks for reading...

Both my stories have been updated and are in the queue for posting. When it's posted, Chapter 8 in vengeance is going to be Meredith learning to use her new magic. Chapter 8 will also be a bit longer because you're going to see the first glimpse of The Order. So I might be a little longer in posting due to its length.

As far as Dominic's Heroes goes, that part of their story is finished. I ended that one and I'm going to start a new book called: Project Eldest Son. That will cover the team finding out who is after them and their money. It will also be them actually working on the project. More characters will be added and introduced as I go.

Thanks for sticking around to read my stories. As always, feedback is appreciated...

Both story's next chapters are being edited. I'm headed out for family time this weekend, so it'll be next week when they get posted.

Also, I would like some opinions from the readers. I'm thinking of having Denise Bring Jimmy back (He was working black ops). What do you think?

I reposted the entire series of Dominic's Heroes today. Here's why, along with another thought or 2.

First off, yes there were some mistakes in my work and I fixed the ones that I found. I also changed some verbiage around so that it might make a bit more sense and be easier to read. Chapter one, I was originally going to use code names for the characters since some spec ops teams use them. But honestly, it got really confusing even for my better half (He's retired Army). So I got all the nick-names out.

Second, the names for the terrorists that I used are all made up in my head and are generally insulting to terrorists. I refuse to list real names of terrorists just because I don't have to. I remember watching an SNL skit with DeNiro a few years back where he was playing a Homeland Security spokesperson and he had a buttload of made up names and I laughed at almost every one of them. So thats where I got the names from. Also there really is an improvised exploding goat video. Look them both up on YouTube.

In closing, thanks for sticking with me and as usual, if you like something or think something could be better, let me know. I've got thick skin and I promise that if it's constructive suggestions, I'll at very least read them.

Thanks...