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Eldest Son ch 4

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Since Liz is gone this and next week for her annual training, I'm assuming duties as writer.

I started and had finished chapter 4 of Eldest Son, but the character interactions didn't seem to mesh like I wanted. So I'm doing a rewrite and I'm planning on posting it probably by monday evening. If you'd like, drop me a note and let me know how you'd like to see the story to move

Eldest Son ch 3

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is in the queue for posting. As usual, comments and feedback are appreciated.

Thanks for reading...

Eldest Son chapter 3

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Is finished and off to the editor. It is significantly longer than the other chapters. Honestly, I started writing and it just moved on to other things that will be explored in coming chapters.

I was asked about all the places that I use for setting like the coffee shops, the streets in Paris and other things. Well I've tried to keep things as realistic as possible. Every street restaurant, night club, coffee house, or whatever is real and you can see it on the map. I hope this answers your question.

Thanks for reading, and as usual, critiques are appreciated.

In the queue...

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Chapter 2 of Project Eldest Son is in the queue to be posted. As usual, we'd love to know what you think or suggestions you might have to make it better...

Chapter 3 is going to be a bit longer than the other chapters I've written. Robert is going to get a potential love interest, and Talitha will show just how malevolent she can be...

Eldest Son chapter 2

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is at the editors and will go into the queue for posting probably Thursday or Friday. As usual, I would like some feedback on how we are doing on the story. Let us know what you like and don't like so we can make it better.

Also, Vengeance is going on the back burner after the next chapter is posted to concentrate on Eldest Son for a little bit.

Thanks for reading and I hope you continue to follow.

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