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Added chapter 11 of this story. I will add chapter 12 later today. I never intended this story to be this long but memory is a funny thing and it ebbs and flows with each passing year.
I had high hopes for this story. It was more Romantic than Erotic but as I come to chapter 10 I realize it does not sustain reader interest That is why I focused less attention on it than I should have over the years. I know in the introduction, I said the first part would end at chapter 10 and I would continue it with 10 more chapters with reader response. I have concluded that is unlikely and will end the SOL content at chapter 10. I may continue the story for later publication under a female pen name in a Fictional Romance Genre.
I apologize to those readers that wrote me they felt the ending was rushed. I had written a "happy ending" but changed it and wrote a "sad" one instead. My personal losses this past year had me actually crying as I wrote the final chapter in the middle of the night. I will bring back the main character Caleb in a new adventure with lots of action for those readers interested in the Adult Western Genre.
The concluding chapter is different than I planned. My brain took over and I had a sad ending rather than a happy one. 16 chapters, almost 35K words and 81 pages of Western erotica.
This chapter is mostly concluding plot content not the usual amount of sex-laden scenes but there is an interesting spanking scene with the youngest Mormon daughter Kate and the interplay between the Range boss Caleb and the girl's mother Hattie. Then the undisclosed news from the beautiful teenaged daughter of the Cattlemen's Association President that sets the scene for the final chapter to be submitted no later than Friday.
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