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Change- "Adventures of the British Ambassador's Secretary"

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Slight change in first paragraph to show that the route of the cruise ship was first to ports on the Med. sea with first long one at Marseilles and then on to the English channel and final port of call at Calais. Also shows a slight change on the transit from Calais to the Chunnel entrance. The wording was confusing and hard to follow. Thank you.

Update on Adventures of the British Ambassador's Secretary

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The Harry Lime story called "The Adventures of the British Ambassador's Secretary" notes for readers.
Author's Note: This story has been reviewed for minimal age requirements. There is no intended Incest content in this story. The original story was heavy with Incest reference between Lady Patricia and her Father, but it has all been removed. In the first chapter, I left in Patricia calling out to Harry using the title "Daddy" but that is not to imply that there was ever any incest between Lady Patricia and her father. It was just a "Daddy's girl" fixation in Patricia's fantasy world and evidence of her "Daddy" issues in all of her relationships with older men. There are multiple chapters here. They were written as "stand alone" stories but because they all interlock with a single main character, I put them all together. I have outlines of several other scenarios for Lady Patricia Prendergast and her on-going relationship with Harry, her world-traveling lover. It would be relatively simple to expand this storyline to about 20 chapters in various parts of the world. (About 100 to 110 pages)
As of September 2018, there are a total of 12 chapters of 56 pages of content.
The original story has been revised several times and is still in need of some serious editing to make a better story less confusing to readers. It is intended to close this story at 20 chapters although that might translate to about 16 in the SOL format. The current chapters are 1. Balkans 2. Venice 3. Cairo 4. Livorno, Italy 5. Livorno, Italy 6. Libya 7. Libya 8. Sochi, Russia 9. Russia 10. Venice 11. London 12. Trieste (New…13. French side of Chunnel)

Introduction: This series of stories are about Lady Patricia Prendergast. She is definitely upper class and has the base instincts of a slut of the worse sort. It is not her fault. It is the way she was trained by her beloved father's military cronies with their kinky ways from exotic far-away countries. In a quiet rural setting in the country or in a foreign country, Patricia, the Ambassador's Secretary is always ready to give it her all.
The original 6 chapters had over one million downloads in EU during period 2011 - 2015)

Updates to continuing stories

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Updating of Stories.
The following stories are currently lined up for updating by Harry Lime and Harry Lime associated pen-names. I Was Framed, Gloria Goodnight's Glamorous Gams, The Male Night Nurse, Dealing with Amy's Little Imp, The Strange Case of the Malloy Girl, Harry and Lucy, Vampirella on the River Cruise, Pork Packers Convention Party, Sister Angela.., Mail Order Brides on Sale, The Foreign Officer's Wives Club, The Transgendered Intern Finds Love, The Ambassador's Daughter, Embassy Story, My Stepsister Learns How to Swim, The Mirrored Dimension, Doreen's Strange Obsession, The Disillusioned Man, The Babysitter and the Brother-in Law, Reservation Pony-Girl, The Babysitter and the Jealous Wife, The Light at the End of the Tunnel, Night Nurse With Naughty Needs, Nanny in Black Garters, Cookies for a Bad Man, Sanctuary City. This is only a partial list of the stories being worked on as there are also a number of longer length stories being continued as rapidly as possible. Thanks to all readers for their much appreciated patience. This listing is roughly 35% of the stories needing updating before the end of 2018.

Ended 2 Good Storylines Due to Lack of Reader Interest

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Regretfully, I ended 2 stories today that I tended to think had decent storylines and both better offerings than most of the xxx on SOL. I know I am not one of the more skillful writers on this site but it seems a shame to me that they have gotten buried by lack of interest and dismal grades. The first one was called "In the Picture" and was an odd story that crossed several genres with an erotic flair. The main character a female with the ability to transfer into stories that she was reading and participate in the erotic highlights was probably too deep for most readers looking for a quick thrill. haha The second story was called "Mountain Girl" and I thought it to be very promising in terms of a rural writing style that originally used poor diction and misspellings to sound more authentic. That was modified for a simpler more easy to read style but it was still rustic and intentionally slow-witted. I will write that off as total reader disinterest and that is quite all right. I intend to chop off all stories that do not receive a fair judgement because it does not conform to some ritualistic style for low IQ readers.

Changes to "The American Girl"

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I came across a story in the Harry Lime mix called "The American Girl" It was misplaced due to having it under a file labeled "The American Wife" in error. It was originally under a "romance" genre but that seemed inappropriate after my changes and I changed it to "erotica" Also changed from "Some sex" to "much sex". Had to change codes to include the "incest" with her "father" to the coding. Her reasons were altruistic to help his depression over loss of her mother to cancer but does not not halt his unfortunate suicide. Her travels now include an experiment with prostitution that was more accidental than intended. Now has over 4K words in chapter 1.

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