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I've had a couple of readers reach out and ask when I'll continue my A Submissive Sibling story, so I wanted to make a post to say that I'm in the middle of selling my house and moving, so there will be a delay before I finish it and get also get the next chapter of The Gloria Hole out.
I have the chapter for Submissive Sibling planned out, but just need to find time to sit down and write it. Thanks to everyone who reached out, I appreciate that you are interested in seeing the story continue.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
Every time I think I'm about to finish A Submissive Sibling with the latest chapter I'm working on, I find myself coming to a natural stopping point. This happened once again with the latest chapter and there is still some more story to be told.
So I can't promise that Chapter 10 will be the end, but it might. It seems like readers are still enjoying it, so we'll see how it goes. Thank you for reading and especially thank you for those who have taken the time to leave feedback or noticed issues.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
I'm still a "newbie" writer, having only started publishing at the beginning of the year. I've gotten a good number of compliments about the quality of my writing so far, so I was quite surprised when I got a message here from a reader telling me that Chapter 7 of my story A Submissive Sibling was repetitive and not up to my usual writing quality. I took a look and used an analysis tool and was horrified to find I had used the phrase "I could feel" 28 times in one chapter.
So it seems I developed a writing tic and was absolutely blind to it. I checked a few of my other recent chapters and found that it occurred there as well, but not quite as badly.
All this to say that I absolutely appreciate the reader, Robert, pointing this out to me. I hope anyone reading my work will help me catch things like this. I want to be a better writer and feedback goes a long way towards helping me on that journey.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
I honestly thought I was going to finish my book Submissive Sibling with this latest Chapter 8. I did my best, writing a huge 10,000 word chapter that turned the story in a new direction. I'm grateful to the response so far, with almost 1,200 folks downloading the new chapter in a little over 24 hours. The score for the story has even crept up a little.
In the end, there was some more story that needed to be told, so I ended this new chapter on a small cliffhanger, and will likely finish with Chapter 9, but there is some more story past that is currently tickling the back of my mind, so it might go another two chapters or so. I did outline this story, so this is new stuff creeping up on me as I write.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee
My SOL debut erotic novel Taboo Tapas - Savor the Sin has been released on zBookStore. It features new illustrations and a free preview of Taboo Tapas II - Savoring Sofia!
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