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Another chapter of Back to the Future - A What if Story, has been posted. I hope you'll enjoy it and if you did, could you take a few moments to leave some feedback, to let me know what you think? I would like to apologise for the late update, but the truth is that the muse for me left me and it wasn’t until recently that it came back to allow me to finish this chapter.
Anyway, I have at least two chapters left for this story. The next chapter is where Marty tells the half truth about himself, and has a threesome with his mother and grandmother. Then the last chapter will be like the movie, where Marty takes his mother to the prom. But unlike in the movie, he’ll have sex with his mother in the car lol. So unless something happens to make the story longer, this part of the story ends in two chapters.
I'm looking for stories where the man/boy gets rewarded by a woman for helping/saving her. If you know any stories like that, please let me know.
I'm after young male teens, having their first time. But older men would do too.
Just posted another chapter of Back to the Future - A What if Story, I hope you'll enjoy it. If you do, could you take a few moments to leave some feedback, to let me know what you think? I would like to apologise for the late update, but I had problems with writing this chapter. Until the last week or so, I couldn’t come up with a good way to write this. So I hope this chapter was worth the wait.
I would like to ask a favour from you all, I have ProWritingAid to help me with spelling and grammar, whilst it doesn’t catch everything, I believe it does help with some of the problems that I have. But here’s the thing, I have only got a free version of this app and so limited to certain corrections. So, I’m asking if you could go to ko-fi. com/ darkdragen and buy me a few cups of coffee so that I can upgrade ProWritingAid to make my writing better. It might not be by much, but I’m hoping that it’ll be better than how my work is now.
Just submitted the first chapter of the bonus chapters Magical Fallout - The Great War. I hope that you'll enjoy the chapter, I have at least three other bonus chapters for this story. The first is to finish this vault story off, which will only be one more chapter or I hope. The second chapter will be about the red mist that I talked about in one of the chapters. Unlike Vault 66, the red mist will be part of the story, so I want to show the effects of this mist, whilst I’m saying that there’ll be only one chapter to this, there might be two. If you have any ideas on the effects, please let me know. The third chapter I have planned is for a moon base, as I have plans for space chapter in my Fallout 3 story once I get to it, and I want to set things up now, Like my mist chapter idea, whilst I’m saying that there’ll be only one chapter to this, there might be two. And if you have ideas for what could happen on the moon base, please let me know.
Now, I would like to apologise for the end of this chapter, yes it looks and feels rushed, I admit that. But, this was one of those chapters where I couldn’t think of a decent ending and so had to end this chapter like this. For that I’m sorry.
I would like to point out, that if you haven't noticed yet, I have started the sequel to this, called, The New World. I hope you take the time and read it and let me know what you think of this story.
Now, before I finish up, I would like to ask a favour from you all, I have ProWritingAid to help me with spelling and grammar, whilst it doesn’t catch everything, I believe it does help with some of the problems that I have. But here’s the thing, I have only got a free version of this app and so limited to certain corrections. So, I’m asking if you could go to ko-fi. com/ darkdragen and buy me a few cups of coffee so that I can upgrade ProWritingAid to make my writing better. It might not be by much, but I’m hoping that it’ll be better than how my work is now.
I'm writing what should be the second to last part to The Birth of The Hub chapters, after which I'm going to write about The Master/Richard Grey and Harold.
But, whilst I'm able to write about Harold easy enough, I need help with Grey. I need help with writing Grey's background, as I find it strange that for someone who was meant to be a murderer, he would be a friendly person and will liked person and be popular, not not be cold and such towards people.
So, I was wondering, was he set up for murder and if so, what reasons could the vault have, seeing he was a doctor, would more than likely be someone they would need because of that? But if he did murder someone, what reason would he have to do so? I remember that Vault 8 wasn't a good place, and had issues, but I do have to wonder why they would exile a doctor, of all people.
So, I would like help with coming up with ideas for Grey, so when I get to his chapters, I'll be able to write about his past that can make sense.
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