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Just submitted another chapter of Magical Fallout - The New World. I hope that you'll enjoy this chapter when it is up. I have about two, maybe three, more chapters of this story to go. I’m using a script that I found on the net for The Postman. I have it all and need to edit it, to add what happens between the talking. And I’ve also had to remove certain parts that haven’t got the Postman or Abby in it. From what I can tell, depending how much I add to the story, I should finish this part of the story in two to three chapters if I’m lucky. But knowing my work, it can have a few more chapters than I planned.
Now, I don’t know how long the Postman and Abby were in the mountains in the movie, but I kept them in the snowy mountains for a few months to make it more believable that Ford was able to set up his own postal route and being able to gain so many people to become Carriers. I can’t see Ford setting up his postoffice and gaining so many people in a month, he would need more time.
I would like to ask, are there any movies/cartoons/anime that I could use to tell the story of Richard Moreau/Richard Grey/The Master and Harold? I ask as I want help to write the story faster so that I can get to the story of the Vault Dweller sooner, that and I got something to work with.
I’m still looking for someone to help with editing this story and the last one, so, if you’re interested in helping me, please let me know. One thing that I need help with is with passive verbs and active verbs, as I’m using ProWritingAid and it tells me I have problems with that. The thing is, I have no idea what passive verbs and active verbs are, and so, I need help with that to make the corrections needed. There are other things that it says I have problems with, but I need to pay to upgrade it before I can see what these problems are. But seeing how I don’t have much money at the moment, so I can’t pay for the upgrade and see what the problem is.
Hey, I meant to do this for a while now, but keep on forgetting to do so, but with my story Magical Fallout - The Great War finished, I'm now looking for an Editor to look through it and make correct any mistakes and change things to make it better.
I would have asked during the writing, but it takes me a long time to update. And seeing how in the past when I asked for one before, the editor would leave or disappear because it took me so long to update a chapter. So now it is finished, it's a different story.
So, if you think you can help make this story better, not only by editing the grammar and spelling but also add more detail to the story. Please let me know and let us talk about this.
I'm looking for a Post Apocalypse where a meteor hit the earth, I can't remember it all. But from what I can remember, I believe the meteor hit the sea and created huge waves, there were mudslides in the story and the main character along his travel finds a lover and her sister/brother. I remember that they have to cross a bridge that is guarded, and he helps the town to become stronger.
I hope you can help.
Story Found, people have been telling me that the story I'm looking for is Aftermath by Al Steiner, thanks for letting me know.
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