Just wanted to post a shout-out to "Robert" for pointing out a pretty major editing snafu that both my wife and I missed.
I usually don't have a problem with one or two out of place commas or a 'the' that should be a 'then' ... but this was pretty BIG.
If you read Chapter One of "Surviving the Island" before they repost it, you'll see that when I originally wrote out the outline for the story and started writing the first few chapters, the Smith sisters were actually the Smith sister and brother.
But I changed the ending quite a bit from the original outline in the middle of Chapter Two (if I remember correctly). I thought I'd gotten all the "boy" and "brother" references wiped out, but it seems I didn't. They should be fixed now.
It's been a long time since I last submitted a story, and mostly that's because life has gotten in the way. My wife and I had our third child not too long ago, and our employment situation changed up about a year before that so that she could be a stay-at-home mom and I would no longer work from home.
I didn't stop writing during that time, but as my time was taken up by other activities, I often found my interest in writing one story or another to wane and wax. I've saved everything and I keep coming back to some stories (though fans of "Story of My Life" will probably never get an ending to that one ... sorry.).
This new submission ("Surviving the Island") is my own take on the whole "stranded on a deserted island" theme that several other authors have penned. While it is a story of survival and sex, like most of my stories, I focus more on the sex, though it does take a few chapters to get to the juicy bits.
I hope those who read it enjoy it.