I just finished posting the second half of Master PC: The Revenge along with about half-dozen reposted chapters where the bullet point formatting hadn't transferred through (hopefully replacing them with simple '-' dashes will make them easier for folks to read). If the dashes don't work, I might go through and add an underline or italics I guess.
Commenting is on, so if/when you finish the story, please do leave a comment or send me a message if you liked it. I always appreciate hearing from people who liked what I wrote.
Thanks everybody!
So it's been over twelve years since I finished something. Done lots of writing in that time, but always seem to write myself into a nice little corner or get lost on a tangent. Had one good solid idea set in the Master PC universe and it actually exploded into several good ideas once I put (proverbial) pen to (proverbial) paper.
I submitted half the story just a few minutes ago, so if all goes to plan, that half should be posted soon. I'll post the second half tomorrow.
While writing "Master PC: The Revenge", I had some other ideas and I'm enjoying writing again so I'll probably go right into starting one of those. Hopefully, a shorter story than this one was. This one is 108,000 words or so (at least according to Google Docs), and that's why there is a reference to Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban near the end. They're about the same length, LOL
Anyway, I hope to post before the next great Age!
Just wanted to post a shout-out to "Robert" for pointing out a pretty major editing snafu that both my wife and I missed.
I usually don't have a problem with one or two out of place commas or a 'the' that should be a 'then' ... but this was pretty BIG.
If you read Chapter One of "Surviving the Island" before they repost it, you'll see that when I originally wrote out the outline for the story and started writing the first few chapters, the Smith sisters were actually the Smith sister and brother.
But I changed the ending quite a bit from the original outline in the middle of Chapter Two (if I remember correctly). I thought I'd gotten all the "boy" and "brother" references wiped out, but it seems I didn't. They should be fixed now.
It's been a long time since I last submitted a story, and mostly that's because life has gotten in the way. My wife and I had our third child not too long ago, and our employment situation changed up about a year before that so that she could be a stay-at-home mom and I would no longer work from home.
I didn't stop writing during that time, but as my time was taken up by other activities, I often found my interest in writing one story or another to wane and wax. I've saved everything and I keep coming back to some stories (though fans of "Story of My Life" will probably never get an ending to that one ... sorry.).
This new submission ("Surviving the Island") is my own take on the whole "stranded on a deserted island" theme that several other authors have penned. While it is a story of survival and sex, like most of my stories, I focus more on the sex, though it does take a few chapters to get to the juicy bits.
I hope those who read it enjoy it.