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Thanks for catching the small typo in Chapter Thirty-One and for your feedback on the codes. Much appreciated.
I'm not a person who buries his stories in codes just because something happens in the telling of the story. If it doesn't bear on the overall plotline of the tale, I avoid it because I don't want to draw in readers thinking that they're going to be reading chapter after chapter of their favourite kink and they find that it happens only once or twice in the story.
My question to my readers however is should I include the code 'voyeurism' or 'exhibitionism' or both into my classification of Game World. Technically, the denizens of the alternate Earth are all voyeurs as they spend their day watching everything that occurs on Game World. As well, both Caitlin and Felicity were voyeurs in earlier chapters of this story. As for exhibitionism, Kola is really into showing off when she makes love and now that Charles has four other wives and the princess and her handmaids, she has a huge audience besides the fact that everyone on the alternative Earth is watching her. More of this will be happening in the upcoming chapters as Charles trades entertainment for services provided by the networks. Because of this I was thinking of changing the codes and I thought I'd ask you readers what you thought.
So what do you think? Should I include voyeurism or exhibitionism or both?
Let me know. Thanks.
Thanks Peter for picking up the small error in Chapter Nineteen. Fixed and reposted.
Thanks for the feedback and for picking up 'that' dropped word and the missing 'e' in bathe. It's appreciated.
This isn't effecting current serial stories. I just noted one of my older stories "New Beginnings: Adam's Story" plummeted from 7.68 as of yesterday to 6.85. Again this is a total piss off to authors and those who follow their stories. In future I think I'll turn off scoring and hope that people will still read what I'm writting.
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