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As many have already pointed out, the first few chapters are missing.
My cut and paste failed miserably!!
The correct version has been submitted.
Apologies
This is a major rewrite of the story.
Although the storyline has not changed, I've tried to add more detail and correct a few typos. I hope this makes the story more interesting.
This is a major rewrite of the story.
Although the storyline has not changed, I've tried to add more detail and correct a few typos. I hope this makes the story more interesting.
I have just updated the story after correcting the numerous typos and other errors spotted by my readers, for which I thank them.
I would also like to thank all who commented as well as those that voted.
Cheers
Following feedback on Apprentice Smith, the rewrite, I'm attempting another story set in the same world. It will not be a sequel but a completly standalone that readers will, hopefully, still enjoy.
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