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OK I have been formulating this new tale in my mind. Sarah is the daughter. She is full figured like her mom. I am thinking 1977. She is a coed at a New York college. The uncle is dying of cancer and has returned to the states. Leah brings her daughter to the hospital and Jeremy meets her. The daughter notices there is something going on between her mother and Jeremy. The uncle passes and at the wake Sarah confronts Jeremy. Sarah has gotten the whole story from her mother but wants to hear Jeremy's version. I haven't decided how experienced Sarah is. Plato's Place was a notorious upscale swapping club in New York City in the 70s. Perhaps she has tasted some wild sex and wants more. Or maybe she is a good girl with forbidden fantasies. Sarah will show up at the penthouse, which Jeremy is now using as the corporation headquarters. There will be several beautiful (of course) Chinese girls working there. Perhaps an older one who has some fem-domme leanings. Sarah will want to visit the hidden room her mother told her about. I will have too think about the force involved. Will she ask him to be her Master so she can learn to be a slave? Will she tease him and have to be made to submit? Perhaps he will refuse her because she is Leah's daughter. Then she will have to beg him in a very humiliating way. Will Leah have to come to the penthouse to rescue her daughter? How would she react to seeing Sarah naked, collared and leashed, kneeling at Jeremy's feet? Would she offer herself in exchange? What if Jeremy wanted them both? Maybe I could throw in an alien or time travel and get this story into the rarefied 8+ polling category.

OK story should pass even the most demanding of the grammar Nazi's reading standards. I was the guy back in school you all hated. The dumb jock the English teacher was persuaded to pass so I could play football on Friday night.

This story is being proofed and re-posted, chapter by chapter. It might take a week or so. If anyone hasn't read it yet I would wait. I have been told by several astute readers I need to be properly schooled.
Thanks to Wyden for his able assistance.

I wish I had more talent in character development. That is a skill that comes with long practice. I hope I was able to convey this was a love story to the reader.
Anyone notices any glaring errors please let me know and I will correct and re-post.
I am going to try a straight science fiction next. The short story has been in my head for years and I need to let it out.

One more chapter to go. I think it is a good ending for this tale. I hope the dismissive ones here will give it one more chance.
LSD was around in the 1950's if anyone questioned my use of this in story. The CIA was testing it for "mind control" according to Wikipedia.
Questions about Ingrid knocking Jeremy out so easily. I saw a friend get sapped by a Boston cop one night and it dropped him stone unconscious. His head was swollen like a grotesque pumpkin the next day.