SmokinDriver: Blog

Chapter 54 has been submitted. Starting with the last couple chapters the transition has started. It is not all about The girls around college and having sex with each of them.

You have / will start to see more of the business aspect come into play. Business contacts, Business plans are starting to develop and will become more prominent. He is still an 18 year old with hormones coursing through his body so I don't think he will become celibate but the story line is progressing to the point where all of the little things are adding up to something big.

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Chapter 40 has been posted and I am going away for the weekend. Look for chapter 41 on Monday.

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I posted two chapters today. I think they go together and didn't want them to be split up so I posted the second one.

I am grateful for all of the comments both positive and negative. It is hard when you get two and one says they love it and the next says they don't for the same reason. I sometime feel like I should change it to make the readers happy but then I have to think about how a change in chapter 30 may effect something in chapter 31 or chapter 61. Everything is linked together in one way or another.

Britt is a teenager with hormones, a good body and a mind that understands what is going on around him. He is going to have sex and as much as he can. If you don't like sex then you can skip over it. Some chapters will be harder than others. I guess what I am saying is that I am sorry if my story is not appealing to you but it is my story. I hope you continue to read. I use and appreciate constructive criticism but if you are just writing to say it is boring or too much sex then you are wasting your time. I can use it on chapter 11 of book two which is what I was writing last night. That is 43 chapters from now. I don't have the time or desire to rewrite the entire story.

Thanks for listening to my rant and as always, Thanks for reading.

Chapter 33 has been posted. It has been a month since the I posted my first chapter of my first story. As I look back I have learned a lot. After reading here for a while I see what most authors are talking about in their blogs. Most authors like the comments since that is their only payment for their work. I like them but some are very interesting in what they think I should do with my story. Most are encouraging and helpful.

I found out very quickly that an editor or in my case editors are critical if you are looking for a good score. I was also surprised that out of the twenty-five hundred people that read the story only four or five comment although I did get ten a couple chapters back.

Thanks for reading and thanks to my editors for keeping the story moving along. I may still cut back to a Monday, Wednesday and Friday schedule but only time will tell.

I guess I struck a nerve with a few people, I got a bit of feed back from the last couple chapters.

My editing team is working hard to process the story and I am releasing it as I have time to give it the final review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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