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Readers want to know if I'm still here?

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It has been a while since I've made a blog post or posted a story. I've received several messages about my not posting new stories.

There are several reasons for my not posting. The primary reason is Part 2 of The Ark has proven to be more difficult to write than I anticipated. A second reason is my creative drive got up and left for a while, but I seem to have found it a couple of weeks ago.

I completed Sauce for the Gander and announced I would be working on The Ark. If I work hard enough and long enough between now and October, I may finish Part 2 of The Ark and be ready to start Opening Earth 3.

I started writing The Ark almost four years ago, posted Part 1 at weekly intervals between Oct 2015 and Mar 2016. I had a few problems in what I posted, so I made a number of cosmetic changes, and had Lazeez replace the existing chapters. After working on other stories, I finally got around to writing the second part of The Ark. I thought it would take 6-8 months to write Part 2 and then I would begin writing OE3.

Things haven't gone as I planned. To start with, Part 2 required more research than I anticipated and the scope of the story increased dramatically. As the scope increased, so did the level of detail and amount of research. If you've read Part 1, you know that the plot was centered on about 12 main characters and Part 1 focused on Jon creating an organization for coping with a natural disaster that would destroy our society and its infrastructure.

Part 2 was intended to address how the central characters and their organization build a new society. I didn't realize how much time and effort would go into writing that half of the story. I had to let my imagination run wild to define the results of the meteoroid shower Part 1 described. I not only had to address the virus killing 95% of Earth's population, but I also had to describe how the meteoroids damaged Earth's surface. What damage might a meteoroid as big as a house do when it hit the surface? How would hundreds of thousands of similar meteoroid strikes with about 70% of those being water strikes affect our weather patterns and damage our infrastructure? What effect would the resulting tsunamis have on the coastline? The largest tsunami wave recorded was over a 1,000 feet high and it was caused by an earthquake. A huge meteoroid landing in the ocean could create an even larger tsunami wave. So how would a 2000 - 3000 foot wave arriving at San Francisco do to the surrounding area.

I'm well into writing Part 2. Part 1's cast was about 12 main characters with a total of about 55 characters mentioned by name. So far, Part 2 has close to 45 main characters and 250 named characters, although most of the 250 are what I call bit players who are mentioned as supporting characters.

Then the writing was slowed down by the technological aspects of the story that I had to research. One of the survivors' primary needs is a fuel source that will allow them to continue using existing vehicles. I had to research several things in that area. First, gasoline degrades with time but how long does that take and how does degraded gasoline affect a vehicle. The same thing for diesel fuel, which I discovered lasts longer than gasoline before it becomes unusable. Second, what is the cracking process that converts crude oil into gasoline and diesel fuel. Would it be viable to put a refinery back into operation or would the survivors need to start making gasohol.

Overall, I think I'm over half way finished with the story and I'm at over 20 chapters. The story has taken on a life of its own and wants to grow. I'm having to rein it in, and will probably end up shutting down Part 2 before the story is really finished. That means I may end up with a Part 3, but not in the near future.

Hopefully, I can find a good break point for The Ark before it goes over 100 chapters. Then I will let my imagination run wild getting Doug and his friends into and out of trouble in OE3.

REP

Since readers asked - What's Next?

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Hi All,

It's been a while since my last post and a few of my feedback message senders have requested that I let them know what is coming up next. I appreciate the feedback I received, so Thank You. A number of the comments will help me in future story development.

A bit of 'Sauce for the Gander' history for those who may be interested. In the original version, which I sent to my editor TeNderLoin, Chapter 8 was a dinner party celebrating the 35th anniversary of the founding of The Rattler. I intended the chapter to be the end of the story and the chapter would have filled everyone in on what happened from where Part 1 ended. TeNderLoin said NO! ... Bad Author! ... Don't end it that way. I listened to him so there will be a Part 2.

I decided that I have too many ongoing serial stories. I can't support all of them in a timely manner, so I will be concluding the majority of the current serials as quickly as I can. Opening Earth and possibly Time Scope will continue. I should be able to manage 2 concurrent serials, so if you have a preference as to which stories should continue beyond their next Part, let me know.

Right now, I'm working on The Ark, Part 2. Part 1 included Jon's intended plan for reclaiming the US. My plans for now are to cover Jon's initial efforts in reclaiming the now battered US territory. How far I go in describing the reclamation and the number of Parts that will comprise is still under consideration. However, my current intent is to end the story with Part 2.

My writing pattern is to focus on one story. During the development of that story, I sometimes need a break and will work on a second story. Right now, I have at least 2 non-serial, multi-chapter stories that are almost complete. I will probably complete and post at least one of those stories before I finish Part 2 of The Ark

My In-Process Stories include:

An Old Man's Lament - A short story about a 70-year old man reminiscing about his past life and the problems he faces with planning the rest of his life.

Caveman Courtship - Hopefully, a humorous story about "Getting Married" way back when. Have you ever wondered 'Why does the bridegroom have a Best Man?' The story is based on current courtship, engagement, and marriage practices and provides a rationale for why those practices exist.

Officer Symms - A D-Hopping Universe story about the life of a female, Multiverse Police Officer. Currently, just an idea that I plan to develop.

Opening Earth, Part 3 - Doug had hoped to delay revelation of certain facts about the Multiverse's culture until Earth's people were more accepting of certain differences (i.e., marital, religious, legal, technological, etc.) between the two cultures. His marriage and honeymoon has made some of those differences known and the international media has spread the specifics of the differences around the world. In addition to his regular problems, a small but very vocal segment of the population are making and implementing plans that will make life even more difficult for Doug. Not to mention a future business rival who wants him dead.

Please Don't Help Me - just an idea for a story about a man who feels and acts on a compulsion to help solve other peoples' problems.

Sam's Hopping - A D-Hopping Universe story about the life of a young man who gains the D-Hop ability as a teenager. The story begins with his life on an unsophisticated, non-industrial Multiverse planet, and it describes aspects of the training he receives to become a D-Hopper, his work as a D-Hopper on his home planet, and starting his own D-Hopping business.

Sauce for the Gander, Part 2 - Carl has collected his lottery winnings. Now he needs to build his publishing empire so he can "explain" to the media why publishing the details of his private life and harassing him was a bad idea.

The Footlocker - During WW II, the Nazi Party looted Europe sending their loot back to Germany. The story has a historical basis and describes the adventures of a young man who befriends an elderly woman. The early chapters focus on the woman's past life and the life of her husband from the time he was college student, who was enamored by Hitler's ideology, until his death as a US citizen to include aspects of his life as a disillusioned senior officer in the Nazi group responsible for storing/hiding the valuables the Nazis looted from Europe. What the woman and her husband did prior to, during, and after WW II and how the young man 'inherits' responsibility for the loot still hidden away is the premise of the story.

The Pink Monkey Chronicles - A 'Conspiracy Theory Story'. Have you ever looked at a graphic representation of the ' Homo Sapiens' Family Tree'. If you just consider the history of our Genus, Homo, all of the sub-branches of the family tree just ended. But What-If one of those 'dead' branches didn't end. What-If the members of that supposedly 'dead' branch were superior to another branch of the tree and found it necessary to hide their existence. What-If that superior branch is still in existence and hiding among our Homo Sapiens branch of the family tree. That is the premise of The PM Chronicles.

Time Scope 3 - The Altarians have landed and the world is aware of their existence and some of their abilities and intentions. Now Jed and Alicia must mediate a treaty between the Altarians and Earth's politicians. Two average people must step in and control the World's Political Leadership. However, they have been given a 'big stick' so the job is not as impossible as it may seem.

Tom the Troll - Just an idea for a fictitious story about Internet Trolls and their victims. Loosely based on my personal experience with disgruntled readers of my SOL stories and similar stories told by other authors.

Story Update

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Time Scope 2 concluded this week. I know it is a cliffhanger ending, but considering where the story will go from this point, I felt it to be the best breakpoint.

I finished the review process of Sauce for the Gander this week, 8 chapters total, and uploaded the first chapter to SOL for posting on Tuesday of next week. Due to the way the posting system works, I cannot upload the remaining chapters until the first chapter is posted for reading. I'll upload the 7 remaining chapters next week for posting on Tuesday at 1-week intervals.

I have received numerous feedback messages asking about The Ark Part 2, so many will be happy that I've gone back to working on The Ark Part 2. Currently, I have about 6 draft chapters complete; a lot of revision will be needed for everything to flow together. I will also have to do a lot of research to gather the details necessary for a somewhat realistic scenario, so progress will be slow.

If you've read Part 1, you know that the Ark is an underground shelter and it has four access tunnels. The main tunnel opening is outside Auburn, Ca on the ranch Jon owns. The starting situation for Part 2 is the meteoroid storm has arrived and the Ark's 1.4 million residents (Arkians) have contracted the virus and been inoculated; most will be very sick and a few will not survive. Outside the Ark, the virus's casualty rate is expected to be about 95%. But unanticipated events will increase that casualty rate in California.

Well I need to get back to writing the story, so bye for now.

REP

New Feedback message system

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SOL is changing its feedback system. As of Saturday June 3rd, 2017 the new feedback system will go into effect.

The new system is an internal messaging system. Your feedback messages to me will be available to me on-site. The replies I sent will be available to you on-site.

This means we will all need to access the SOL website to read the internal messages.

The Webmaster will be providing details of the new system.

For those of you who wish to contact me directly by email, my email address is REP1000@outlook.com. I will respond via email.

A Quick Status Report on Future Stories

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I hope you are enjoying Time Scope 2.

Chapter 11 was posted last Tuesday and while it is not yet apparent, Jeb and Alicia's lives are about to change dramatically. Of course, if you have been reading between the lines regarding what is happening on the Altarian spaceship, then you can see there is some handwriting on the wall that indicates something will happen. You may not be able to read what is written on that wall, but you know something big is in store for Earth.

I have fallen behind on writing my coming stories as a result of several factors. Currently, I am in the process of finalizing Sauce for the Gander. As some of you may have noted, a story with an identical title has been recently posted. I have been in contact with the Authors of that story and we are in agreement to use the title for both of our stories.

I have about 8 weeks to finalize Sauce and have it ready to post when Time Scope 2's final chapter is posted. I decided to wait and allow the other Authors to finalize their story before I start posting my story. Hopefully, they will complete their story before the last chapter of Time Scope 2 is posted. If it takes them longer than 8 weeks to finish their story, I will have to re-evaluate my decision to defer posting.

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