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Hello Boys and Girls;
It's been a while but I've finally started posting a new/old story. It's new name is Because You Were Cold it is the rewritten and (finally) finished story that I originally started some five years ago called “Lightning in a Bottle”. In this version, I have combined all three stories, added the ending and in general tried to clean it up and eliminate as many of the errors in spelling and grammar as possible.
Feel free to respond as you wish but know that Stories-on-Line now makes it very difficult for me to respond to your emails. And with my advanced age and failing eyesight, even this re-edit and re-post has taken me considerably longer than it used to. However, I do enjoy hearing from you, good or bad.
As for those of you who wrote to ask, my doctors have determined that I should enter a local Hospice program as they are not optimistic for my future. I have stubbornly refused and with my wife by my side, have spent considerable time and energy searching for alternative medicines and cures.
I hope you enjoy the revamped story.
Phil Brown
May, 2025
Just a quick update to let you know I just posted the next six chapters of Lightning in a Bottle. They should be up shortly.
If you spot any errors in posting, spelling or grammar, please let me know.
(If you're following closely, you'll notice that I have also made corrections to almost every previous chapter, thanks to your eagle eyes and willingness to let me know).
As always, thanks for reading my story,
Phil Brown
I guess that there are a bunch of masochists out there that just enjoy the pain of reading my story. So in order not to deprive them of their pleasures, I am going to extend the third book of Lightning in a Bottle.
I just added four more chapters and am working on more. No promises on how fast I will get them posted.
Enjoy!
Phil Brown, October 2023
Just posted the final book (3) of the "Lightning in a Bottle" saga.
Hope you enjoy it.
Many thanks to Cassie for editing for me. Any other mistakes are all mine.
Enjoy!
For those of you who are mothers, Bless you and Happy Mother's Day!
For those of you blessed to have had a mother, Happy Mother’s Day!
I’d like to thank everyone for submitting the spelling and grammar corrections for Lightning in a Bottle, (Books I and II). I finally got around to making most of them and reposting the stories.
Of course, that doesn’t mean that they are error free. I’d have to be able to afford real editors for that to happen. Since that’s not an option for now, I guess you all will just have to do better.
Working on LiaB-3 now, but had to take time off to go back to the hospital in Atlanta for more tests. Seems I’ve got another heart valve (tricuspid) that's leaking. They haven’t figured out what to do with it yet.
As always, thanks for reading my stories and all the editing help,
Phil Brown
May 14, 2023
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