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I got a comment pointing out that Amanda's actions in The Nyanny Part 2 were a very flawed treatment of the character, and it was absolutely right. The problem is I was more concerned with exploring the limits of a bioroid than I was in a decent depiction of a polyamorous household. I took Amanda too far and then handwaved it away much too easily. However, while proofreading it I came up with a follow-up scene for down the line that revisits this and explores it a little more.
Anyway, here's a little tease for the next story coming up in April:
Not all tentacle attackers are beasts, some are monstrous vegetation, and one super-villainess stands apart as the mistress of plants…
I just realized I never put this here.
After a while I realized the main story gimmick in The Five Forms of Kimber is derivative of Ben 10, but Kimber is much sexier than Ben, so hey, why not. It's also admittedly a Plot Tailored to the Party with the medallion animals, but that's just how these things go.
As for the animal forms themselves, at this point my catgirl fetish should be obvious. Kimber's cat form is similar to Felicia from Darkstalkers. Compare real bird anatomy to many winged people you see in fiction and you notice the wings are completely unnatural and shouldn't function. Poking around the web I found a bunch of artists trying to do better, make people wings more realistic, which I wanted as well. I found one with a particularly clever twist and promptly stole the idea for Kimber's bird form. Credit where credit is due. If you didn't pick up on it, that last costume was a miko uniform.
A new story at last, a fantasy tale with five chapters presented biweekly. Chapter 1 of "The Five Forms of Kimber" is now available to read. I hope you enjoy it!
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