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Commentary: King Dong

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I have to say, it's a tremendous pain in the ass writing with one eye on a preexisting story in order to "homage" the pacing and dialogue as closely as possible. The end result came out great, I think, but the process was pretty tiresome.

I am glad that I was able to "fix" the reference to Beauty and the Beast. The original King Kong completely perverted what that fairy tale is about by saying the lesson is that love makes men weak. Granted, in the original versions (before Disney got ahold of it and added Gaston and talking furniture), the beast claimed to be dying of a broken heart at the end, but that was mostly the plot's way of forcing Beauty to choose once and for all to be with him or not. I think my twist makes it a closer description of what happens in the actual story. Yes, the real lesson is that Beauty is able to see past Beast's ugly appearance and behavior and accept her affection for him, but gloss over that part and you're also left with the often true stereotype that girls tend to be more excited by "bad boys" to begin with.

By the way, yes, 1978 was the year the original Hollywood sign was taken down and replaced. If you remember in the Rocketeer film how they worked in the destruction of the "land" portion of the "Hollywoodland" sign, well this is my version of that. It fit well with the 70s being the heyday of the "Golden Age of Porn".

I've also been made aware that somebody else beat me to several of the same ideas, but in the end that's not actually all that surprising.

The next story

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So what's next? I thought it was about time for another big tentacle monster story. I figured to keep things fresh, I should create a monster as opposite from the one in "Interview" as I can. So while Gruthsorik was intelligent and conversational, this one should be bestial and driven by animal instinct only. While Gruthsorik was large and imposing at 8 feet tall, this one should be terrifyingly huge, more like 25 or 50 feet tall. While Gruthsorik could hide in plain site in the modern world, this one should be hidden from the world in some remote location, perhaps set some decades back when that really meant something. While Gruthsorik spent most of "Interview" as a prisoner, this one should capture and hold his story's female protagonist for a large portion of the plotline.

While thinking through all of that, I suddenly realized that I was describing a story that already existed, in fact a very well known story. Rather than pretending to ignore the similarity, I decided to embrace it and go full-blown homage/parody/remake of this famous story. The writing's all done at this point, I just have to do one last round of proofreading and then run it through the formatting conversions necessary for the various places I publish to. Have you figured it out yet? My next story will be a tentacle monster version of the original King Kong film, the black and white one from the thirties. Should be kicking off within the next month or so.

Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther blog 15

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Thanks for reading Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther: Cold Front! It's been a great ride creating the series.

In the end, perhaps the only thing more insane than assigning opening and closing theme songs to a prose story is choreographing a fight scene to a song in a prose story. All the extra work on the animations and such was worth it, but I hope it's a long time before another story inspires me to that level of crazy.

And yes, the opening with the self-referential movie is a rip-off/homage to the first Naruto movie.

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...And thanks for reading Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther! I hope everybody enjoyed it!

So if that was supposed to be analogous to a 13 episode television "season", it does raise the question, will there be a season 2? Well, the answer is no. But, popular anime series that have reached their conclusion do often get one other type of continuation: a movie! So I'm going to do something along those lines. What this means is a giant-sized stand-alone adventure that I will publish in one start-to-finish piece on or about March 3.

For anybody not familiar with mecha musume, which Jennifer became for her final battle power up, I shall now bore you at length explaining it and giving examples:

Mecha Musume, or Mecha Girls, is all about sexy girls wearing armor. Not full body armor like you see in Bubblegum Crisis or Iron Man, but partial armor that shows off most or all of their feminine curves. Oftentimes with large wings, rockets, or weapon structures mounted on their backs. Sometimes it actually is a smallish mecha they are piloting, but with an open-air cockpit to keep their sexiness on display. Another common subgenre uses armor themed after WWII military vehicles.

The originator is Japanese artist Mika Akitaka, whose MS Girl artwork put girls in armor inspired by mecha from the Mobile Suit Gundam series. These days it's not uncommon to find mecha musume fanart for any popular mecha series, like Super Robot Wars, these Zoids girls from artist Ueyama Michirou, and Transformers girls from artist Shibamura Prime a.k.a. Silas Zee.

Some video games with mecha musume are Triggerheart Exelica (with some pretty nice looking H-doujin out there) and the Cosmic Break / Cosmic League series of MMO games. I even found some mecha musume themed hentai games, but no English versions, so all I can say is thank goodness for the people that upload dumps of H game CGs to gallery sites because these are amazing: Iron Maiden Hagane no Otome (CG gallery & manga), Mecha-Mimi (CG gallery), Madou Souhei Kleinhasa (CG gallery).

Recent toy lines with mecha musume include: Busou Shinki from Konami, which had a variety of artists design them in pairs. The toy line was originally connected to an online game, and eventually saw Playstation Portable games and an anime. Frame Arms Girl from Kotobukiya, a series of model kits based on their own Frame Arms series of original design Mecha model kits, also with a recent anime. (Special mention to another Kotobukiya model kit series, Megami Device.) Armor Girls Project from Tamashii Nations, which does characters from a variety of series, including Gundam in the style of Mika Akitaka. Desktop Army from Megahouse. Also a trio of bunnygirl Haruhi Suzumiya figures from Composite Ver Ka and a Zoids Shield Liger girl from Figutto.

Then there's the cosplayers, oh my God. If I saw a girl in a costume like these at a convention, I think I'd follow her around the rest of the day leaving a trail of drool behind me.

Here are some gallery sites collections of mecha musume artwork, with sometimes broader definitions of what's included.

Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther blog 13

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Did I say no rape monsters earlier? And you believed me?

The eyes rolled back, mouth hanging open expression that Jennifer takes on once she is overwhelmed is a particular favorite of mine. The Japanese term is ahegao, a lot of the image boards use the tag fucked_silly for it too. You may recall the same expression in "Interview" after Claire's first double-vaginal-double-anal tentacle fucking.

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