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In view of the complaints I had re grammar both BarneyR and I are doing our best to give you a good read.
I am going in for some surgery today but I hope to keep to weekly posting.
Let me know how you find it is to read now.
We are close to the end of the tale which I will complete before the new year. Thank you very much for all of you who have written and commented both favorably and unfavorably. It will take some time before book 2 and three already for publication on the site.
In book 2 Jason is still unable to get to the Empire. He has to deal with the planets that have been attacked by the Mob and then the Mob core worlds.
In book 3 he does reach the Empire but very quickly meets some very interesting people.
My thanks to BarneyR who has done a lot of the proofreading and editing in this book.
I will post the penultimate chapter in a few minutes but I do want you to have the whole story before the new year.
Thank you very much to those of you who have sent feedback. Shortly the next installment will show up after it passes through the moderators. There is more trouble on the horizon.
The story begins to move forward quickly from here. We have covered the basics and it now starts to get exciting. I hope you enjoy it. Please score it and I am happy to receive feedback.
I have posted chapter 3. Its the last of the chapters before the story speeds up and things begin to happen. Jason is on the ship and its a hard slog but it gives you some necessary background.
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