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The Warlord and the Traitor Beta new post

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After many comments, I have rewritten and changed the series so it is a different story. I am posting book 1 over a month then book 2 then book 3. My thanks to Jim 7 for his great ideas and editing as well as BarneyR who has edited and proofread and done excellent work with the new books. Thank you to those who commented wrote and advised last time. I have taken some ideas and am keeping others in mind.
Editors are often unappreciated. Mine have made an enormous difference to the quality of my writing and I hope your enjoyment of reading.
The changes made it necessary for a total rewrite and reconceptualization of the series. As I wrote by the seat of my pants I found myself stuck with situations that I could not resolve well. This time I wrote and planned in detail.
As I finish the blog I will post five chapters then five a week till completion.
Enjoy!
I hope you enjoy these books.

Warlord Book 2 Coming to an end-Happy Easter last 2 chapters

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Happy Easter to you all. I have put up the last two chapters and hope you have enjoyed the story. I will let you know when the next one will go up when it is edited. For the time being, I am looking at a rewrite of book 1. Please let me have any specific feedback you have and anything you would like in the story or the universe. I am happy to look at any suggestions. How are you finding the writing and editing now?
My thanks to BarneyR for book 1 and 2 and Tyketriker for part of book 2.

Chapter 6

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A pre- edited Chapter 6 was posted by me in error. My apologies to you all and thank you for those who alerted us to this issue. Its had an editorial reconsideration as well thanks to Tyketriker.

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Tyketriker has proofed and re-edited the first three chapters and edited and proofed Chapter 4

Book 2

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In view of the complaints I had re grammar both BarneyR and I are doing our best to give you a good read.
I am going in for some surgery today but I hope to keep to weekly posting.
Let me know how you find it is to read now.

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