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My chapter 27 of Detoxing has appeared with odd characters instead of quote marks and apostrophes. It must be a technocal glitch of the SOL site. I have reposted the chapter in hopes that bit will appear correctly this time.
It was pointed out to me by a helpful reader that while the story is set in the USA, my descriptive text uses British English. I have rewritten the start of Chapter One to explain this.
The story gets more interesting as it goes on...
Reginald's Future has been re-edited to get rid of a continuity error that showed up in the following story in the series.
New version has been posted today.
I find myself having to point out to a few authors that they have chosen the wrong word in a sentence, where the words SOUND the same, but have different meanings.
For example, REIN and REIGN. Rein is to do with controlling a horse, and similar effect, but Reign is what a monarch does in a country.
Another common pair is COMPLEMENT and COMPLIMENT. To Complement is to add to, while to Compliment is to say thanks for a job well done.
There are many more, but words do have meanings,so using the right one is important.
If I am reading your story and there is a long section about your character playing an American football game, how relevant is it to the actual story? If paying this game has little relevance, please do not waste the reader's time wading through detailed description of moves in the game.
Would you like it if I wrote a romance and spent a thousand words of it about the playing of a shinty game?
In the same way, a few authors show how much they know about firearms by spending ages in description of what each weapon and type of ammunition can do. Is it relevant to the story? If the story is about a firearms-obsessed man, then yes, but if the weapons are a side isuue, then don't bother with all the unnecessary detail. You can display your expertise in a single paragraph, if you are a good writer.
The gist of the above is, please self-edit your writing to keep it to the story line. That will improve the tale.
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