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Almost left something out of Chapter 18 -- but he clued me in -- thanks, Denny!
Probably should offer a prize for the reader who identifies the most egregious error in an upload -- but then I'd go broke! Just had such a notification this morning, that neither I nor my editor caught, and it totally reversed the meaning of a passage in chapter 17. Fixed it forthwith, and am again indebted to our host. It's not one that will require re-reading -- if you missed on the first go 'round, no harm. Now back to chapter 18, where sparks are indeed gonna fly. Some kind of sparks, anyway!
Found an error just after I posted chapter 17, and had to go back and correct it. NOT my editor's fault! Would have had Belinda riding a VERY old horse! Things are going to pick up very soon, I think.
Chapter 16 is up, and chapter 17 is at the editor. Have had some very encouraging comments, and some questions as to why Rob didn't radio for the Coast Guard right off, to report Todd's chemically enhanced rape attempt. You'd have to ask Rob about that, all I know is that it wouldn't have made for a very exciting story.
But we're not done with him yet.
And sorry about those looking for a stroke story -- not really my bag. There're lots of those out there if it's yours.
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