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I know, it's been a few days. I used to get a little impatient as well, waiting for the next chapter. A couple of physical issues, along with dealing with the passing of a dear friend, have slowed things down a bit. Next chapter is halfway done, but the words are really resisting being dragged out. Couple more days, I think. Thanks for patience!
21 is up!
Got a suggestion saying that the dual pov is a poor choice. This is the first time I've tried using it, usually write in first or third person. What say ye?
Feedback welcome!
thanks!
Should be there by morning.
Not easy following these two around. Glad they know what they're doing!
Got real cold the last few days, so I just sat in front of the fire with my laptop again. I'm beginning to wonder what these two are gonna get into next!
Remember there are two separate stories following Oyster's original first chapter, which he turned over to us. Just got a response about "deviating from the story line" - in O'too, (my version)Kay hasn't yet moved in with Rob -- was gonna stay a night or two after he got home from the hospital, but then got the call from home.
Soon!
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