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Okay, 24... I shall expect 'letters'
I've also updater the list of characters and comments.
Enjoy
Martin
An apology, sorry, there were problems with Jakes journey and I had extracted parts to be rewritten and didn't erase everything. Or something. It should be right now.
M
In the queue. My thanks to Old Rotorhead for editing and his erudition - that means he's read more book than me - which has improved the end result and kept it more accurate historically. 24 is already under way.
Enjoy
Martin
Old rotorhead has edited chapters 18,19,20 and 21. Generally my bad punctuation, but he has also made some excellent suggestions and pointed out some historical inaccuracies. I think we have a much improved and readable stroy.
I had also made a silly error in naming Lord Kingswood's daughter Lady Kingswood. That would, of course, be his wife. So when you see her in future she will be Lady Beatrice Hatherley.
I've just update the character list to include 21 with a few notes
M
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