Aurora: Blog

just a short one, well none of mine are that long, short attention span I guess. This one orginally occured to me whilst I was standing behind a stall at a food fair watching the women as usual and some naughty thoughts came into my overactive brain cell. I realised that if it was a boy mentally touching up women then it would just be another mind control story, so I turned it around.

This series seems to have gone on for ever, but this is the final part and if there are any loose ends they are just going to dangle, i have got other stories that I want to get on to and this one has gone as far as I can take it.
Interesting thing about scores is that for a sex story site I get better scores with less sex. Two possible conclusions - people get fed up with reading about it or I don't write it very well. Probably the latter.

It really was complete and then someone said they'd like to know what happened next and so... this is how it ends. I think.

I've been struggling with the next part of Jake White (it is nearly written) and then this idea occured to me. It is a bit different and I have used someone elses idea, but the first paragraph will tell you that. It takes me a long time to write a story, not because I don't write very fast but I do a bit and then think about it and... so on. And then I edit and re-edit. There may be more of this, and more with the same theme, it has plenty of opportunity for humour. Oh and to the person who always scores me a one, 'I' - that's a finger, rotate on it buddy.

I've been through all of the stories doing an edit - not much so if you just want to read the new one - Opportunities - don't worry. Each story continues from the last.
I have such an untidy mind that people have had to work their way through this without guidance but now it should be better.
After 4 I thought I'd exhausted this story line, but a reader suggested there was mileage and I started with a bit of an idea and it snowballed. Quite whether the poor sod will be able to cope with the expanded business, the number of women and something which I will get castigated for because there is an indication that there might be an Ma Ma interaction but no details so if you don't like that... tuff.