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Quick update. I have altered and reposted chapter five. The only change is the last paragraph. It was pionted out to me that this wasn't very nice, and in fact I decided it was out of character
I have been having a dose of writer's block. Now I know that it is no good sitting back waiting for inspiration, if it isn't coming you gotta work at it. So I was reading through my stories when I realised that the fifth chapter had never been posted. So I rounded it out and here it is. At the same time various thought had been chasing ech other thorugh my brain cell and there will be a sixth.
It has been a frustrating time because I really wanted to sit down and write and it is curious that once you get going again something else pops into your mind.
I am also going to get the next chapter of Jake White up together. I've not been happy with it but I think it is going to have to go as it is. Soon.
just a short one, well none of mine are that long, short attention span I guess. This one orginally occured to me whilst I was standing behind a stall at a food fair watching the women as usual and some naughty thoughts came into my overactive brain cell. I realised that if it was a boy mentally touching up women then it would just be another mind control story, so I turned it around.
This series seems to have gone on for ever, but this is the final part and if there are any loose ends they are just going to dangle, i have got other stories that I want to get on to and this one has gone as far as I can take it.
Interesting thing about scores is that for a sex story site I get better scores with less sex. Two possible conclusions - people get fed up with reading about it or I don't write it very well. Probably the latter.
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