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Some difficulty writing this, a lot of research, but I got there. Every time I get part way through a chapter I think I've run out of things to say, but at the end I seem to have more, so there is more to come.
It was pointed out to me that the site has an age limit of 14 for sexual activity, due I am told to it being hosted in Canada. The girl in the story was 12 in order that the man would get a life sentence (UK) otherwise other elements wouldn't work. So I have re-written with the age omitted - if you work back from the end it is 14 and complies with SOL's requirements - so that you can use your imagination as to what age the man thinks she is. I've also made one or two other alterations and additions. I was going, at this point, to insult the folks who only scored it 3,4,or 5 but I can't be bothered.
I have been struggling with the next chapter of Jake White - now Sir Jacob, of course - when this entered my mind quite unbidden and almost wrote itself.
I noticfed several people had read this recently. It's about a possible Brexit scenario, and I wondered whether it needed updating (it was written about a year ago. I decided not. It certainly is the most contraversial thing I've written - marks from 1 to 10, and lots of comment. Stick to Jake White, I think.
Whilst I was incapacitated my download count went over 250k - thank you. This chapter has been written in a couple of stages, first with one finger and then with the middle finger of my left hand added. I have to say with some pain because having been unused for the best part of a month I now seem to have developed carpel tunnel syndrome and the tennis elbow I have suffered from for years has recurred and... I just want you all to appreciate just what I have to go through to bring you this high quality literature!! All please feel free to laugh! Oh, and enjoy.
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