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It's chapter 13 of the Jake White saga, I really didn't think it would get this far and 14 is already in the works!
If there is one thing I like about my readers it is their sense of humour. And their patience, so that's two things. I don't think I need to say much about this chapter except enjoy, whilst I continue the hard work on the next chapter.
Some difficulty writing this, a lot of research, but I got there. Every time I get part way through a chapter I think I've run out of things to say, but at the end I seem to have more, so there is more to come.
It was pointed out to me that the site has an age limit of 14 for sexual activity, due I am told to it being hosted in Canada. The girl in the story was 12 in order that the man would get a life sentence (UK) otherwise other elements wouldn't work. So I have re-written with the age omitted - if you work back from the end it is 14 and complies with SOL's requirements - so that you can use your imagination as to what age the man thinks she is. I've also made one or two other alterations and additions. I was going, at this point, to insult the folks who only scored it 3,4,or 5 but I can't be bothered.
I have been struggling with the next chapter of Jake White - now Sir Jacob, of course - when this entered my mind quite unbidden and almost wrote itself.
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