If you read this story in it's first publishing, you were probably appalled at the poor punctuation, grammar and spelling. This is essentially a re-write of that first offering!
Now that I've learned a bit more, I see that the second edition also needed some improvement as well, so here it is.
I am humbly indebted to the proofreading skills of my friend Turbo, without whom this would still be an appalling mess. His patience and (mostly) gentle hand has helped me to re-create this as the truly readable story I wanted it to be. I hope that this latest edition is even better!
Any errors in punctuation, grammar or spelling are truly mine and mine alone!
Also, a quiet thank you to Orb for his kind words of encouragement and pointing me in the right direction! (He'll know)...
There are others out there in "ether land" that I owe a debt of thanks to as well. I'm afraid to start a list for fear I'll forget someone, but you know who you are!
Therefore, Ladies and Gentlemen, It gives me great pleasure to present once again..."These Girls Can Play!"