I'm looking for some quick feedback. This is my first story that I've written in a long time.
Feel free to send me an email telling me what you liked and disliked. I even enjoy getting emails from people helping me with my grammar and technical issues! Please help point out any mistakes or spots that could be written better. My skin is pretty thick and as appreciate people pointing out flaws with my writing.
I would like to thank everyone for his or her feedback and help with editing! You know who you are