Immortal Sight
by Sonarflash2026
Copyright© 2026 by Sonarflash2026
Fantasy Story: The Immortals of Lynsay Sands novels are "scientific" vampires" descended from Atlantis. Biomolecular nanos in their bodies require human blood as fuel for replication and to repair their host. I’ve used her not vampire” theme to create this story. So, a blind, mortal hacker working for an immortal corporation out of Toronto, Brad is flown across Canada to solve computer problems at the vinyard of a widowed European immortal.
Caution: This Fantasy Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa Consensual Romantic Heterosexual Fiction Science Fiction Extra Sensory Perception Geeks Royalty Transformation .
Though he appreciated his new, high-teck artificial eyes, Bradley McWilliam remained a bit critical. Images from the nanotech prosthetics were less than perfect. That much he knew empirically. Though a gun accident at eighteen had ruptured both eyes, Brad still had a good visual memory. Now, ten years after his most recent surgery, after a difficult adaptation to cortical implants and months of recurring headaches, the spectacle of a sunset was still little more than a blurry fireball amid braiding streaks of reddish pink and lavander. His photographic memory and imagination were still able to fill in details, but the lack of resolution was frustrating.
He stared out a window of the luxurious suite, unimpressed by the blurred image of grape vines on chalky hills. Silver Estates Vinyard in the Cowichan Valley of Vancouver Island produced huge quantities of grape juice and select fine wines, but the computer specialist wasn’t there to indulge in wine tasting, certainly not to enjoy the scenery, or his sophisticated hostess.
Thoughts drawn back to the dining room and dinner, Brad found it difficult to get a clear impression of the vineyard owner. The widow Angelique De Joliette- Castille, ‘just call me Angelique dear’, was an enigma. Elegant but not aloof, the woman had breezed in after the maid deliberately seated him at the foot of a fairly long banqueting table. Despite the quality of his artificial eyes, his prosthetic contacts could prove annoying. Even after focusing, they were incapable of giving fine detail and sharp resolution at more than a metre distance. Cameras in the lenses communicated with trancievers and implants connected to severed optic nerve, providing him reasonably functional vision; but his position at the dinner table had been at least three metres from the owner of Silver Estates.
Dressed in a cream and gold confection, the lady appeared rather blurry. She hadn’t approached his end of the table or offered her hand. Instead, she greeted him warmly from a distance, being seated by her large, rather intimidating butler.
Brad was not offended. His boss in Toronto had warned him that the lady was a reclusive widow, a fairly recent European transplant. Along with that, she was a respected, close friend to his employers superior and some very influential, very wealthy people.
Surprisingly, her complexion was a light moca, quite unlike the pale white of many immortals. The woman’s features had been indistinct, but a few items were identifiable. Her eyes were large, slightly arched and a dark brown, almost black, flecked with the luminous silver common to many immortals. A brilliant diamond pendant dangled in the widows modest cleavage, and a large, sparkling solitare flashed on her left ring finger. He knew the lady was extremely rich, so didn’t think the jewelry an attempt at being ostentatious.
As much as possible, Brad tried to observe Angelique De Joliette-Castille all afternoon. Unfortunately, she always kept a couple metres distance between them. Still, he did manage glimpse a little of features that seemed oddly familiar.
Almost everything in the mansions huge dining room had been little more than a blur, so resigned to the limitations of technology, Brad mostly used his reliable hearing skills. Sometimes, they gave him an advantage. The woman opposite actually conversed with him, demonstrating a lovely, curiously inflected contralto voice. The hint of a smile in her words kept sending pleasant shivers down his spine. On rare occasions, certain female voices had that effect. At some visceral level he found Angelique De Joliette- Castille’s voice extremely attractive. Now and then, he closed his eyes, shutting out the artificial sight, sinking into their conversation, forming a much more fanciful impression of the cultured widow. Something about her voice resonated, stirring up feelings that had lain dormant for decades.
The butler, or at least, he assumed that is what the hulking male was, had pulled the cork from a bottle and poured. That too he was able to follow. He watched as a pale, bare arm and blurry hand-not the one with a diamond ring-lifted the glass to examine the colour. She delicately sniffed the bouquet, even tasted a sip. That done, she gave a nod of approval. An attractive little maid then filled Brad’s cut crystal stemware. Shortly after, a starchy, uniformed footman began serving the meal. One thing surprised him. All through several courses of dinner, the woman ate, enjoying and commenting about each dish.
“Didn’t think the real old immortals bothered eating,’ he mused, recalling details given to him by his boss. Over years of employment with Argeneau Enterprises, he accumulated several facts about immortals. He knew they could eat solid food, but old ones didn’t enjoy the chore. Angelique had definitely enjoyed each serving. Whatever her age, the nanos in her system would be keeping their host at peak condition, preventing weight gain while repairing any degredation. He also knew that aside from eternally looking in her mid twenties, she would have physical and psychic abilities far exceeding those of mortal humans.
Lost in thought, no longer aware of the blurry view outside his room, Brad found his mind pleasantly recalling the widow’s voice.
Shortly after arriving, Brad couldn’t help but know that the mansion was staffed by immortals. He was greeted at the main entrance by an enormous, powerfully built man. Though he introduced himself as Montcrief, the lady’s butler, Brad thought he seemed more like a bodyguard, his intense, dark brown eyes showing flecks of luminescent gold. Close up, Brad could determine that much detail. More telling, Brad knew that the butler had quickly sifted his mind. Sensitive to mental invasions, Brad detected the slight telepathic ruffling inside his head. Once in the foyer, a tall, curvy maid with swirling, silver flecks in sapphire blue eyes escorted him to a comfortable suite. Even Linda, the petite brunette maid pouring his wine and serving desserts from a cart was exceptional. Not only trim and attractive, the glowing silver in her eyes contrasted sharply with beautiful, moss-green irises.
Brad’s decades of computer work for Argeneau Enterprises resulted in his ferriting out a few secrets. Though they preferred being called immortals, one unnerving fact was their vampiric need for whole blood. After giving his employer several years of dependable service, performming a lot of ‘white hat’ hacking, followed by development and perfection of totally illegal procedures, Bradley McWilliam gained trust and, as he proved himself, much deeper access to corporate activities. His phenomenal computer skills enhanced programs that specifically created new identities, false birth records and social security numbers, slipping them into Canadian government and provincial computer systems without detection. Early conclusions that he was working for the CIA, NSA or the RCMP CSIS branch proved incorrect. When he saw data invoicing large shippments of refrigerated blood from an associated corporation, he began to wonder.
Finally, with suspicions crystallizing, he asked his immediate supervisor pointed questions. Instead of attempting a memory wipe, his Toronto boss let him know the truth, introducing him to many aspects of the immortals, their powers and origin. He confirmmed their vampiric existence, along with a history dating back before the destruction of Atlantis, and the scientific, bioengineered reason for their needing extra human blood. After that, senior management stopped wearing contact lenses when Brad was in conference with them. At close range, his artificial eyes could resolve the unusual gold or silver flecks swimming in their irises. He quickly learned that the glowing motes revealed their mood, along with the fact that their bodies were saturated with bioengineered nanomolecular bots called nanos.
A few days before, and with little warning, Brad had been hustled to an airport and flown to British Columbia in an executive Gulf Stream. At the Abbotsford airport, he was quickly transferred to a Dash 8 turboprop which took him to Victoria. A fast Bell helicopter picked him up there, taking him over the Saanich Inlet, north to the Cowichan Valley vinyards. While airborn, he reviewed text files on his lap-top. He was tasked with tracing attempted hacks. Twice, a hacker managed to crash vineyard computers and corrupt data.
Packed in with his luggage were familiar devices to upgrade server encryption and estate security. Before leaving the office in Toronto, he had been briefed, and already knew that Mrs. De Joliette-Castille, ‘just call me Angelique dear’, was a wealthy immortal with powerful connections both in North America and Europe.
Brad guessed that she was experiencing other, equally serious problems. Old immortals suffered because of their talents. Some became reclusive, choosing isolation. Some went mad because of loneliness, or became so twisted that they turned rogue. He learned that rogues were hunted down by council enforcers, judged and destroyed.
After the late supper, Brad settled at a computer nook, powered up one of the estate’s PC’s, then plugged his modified lap-top into another of the ethernet wall-sockets. After both computers were up and running, he connected them with a specialized USB link. He then ran one of his sophisticated virus scans. Within twenty minutes he knew exactly how the estate server had been compromised. Along with that, every PC in the network had become infected. Worse, there was a Trojan in the estate server. His programs protected the PC and lap-top, allowing him to fingerprint the infections, and after another twenty minutes, excise the Trojan.
After hours of work, Brad activated a trace-back program, already certain that the hacker was not very sophisticated. By two in the morning, he discovered that the attempted hacks were from a rank amateur, random and easily dealt with. By three in the morning, cyber-authorities had been alerted. Late that morning, RCMP armed with a warrant would be knocking at a door in the Cowichan Valley. Brad grinned. He guessed that a certain thirteen-year old girl would be wetting her panties; and, her parents would not be pleased with resultant legal issues.
As dawn showed through window drapes, he was satisfied. estate computers were not only purged, he had encrypted each with a three-level access code, installing his own firewalls and detection programs.
Work done, he spent a couple of hours deeply engrossed in World of Warcraft with more than a dozen on-line friends, then he began nodding off. Three times, he was jarred awake when other gamers razzed him, tired of waiting for his participation. Finally, earphones slipping off, he dozed, chin coming to rest on his chest.
Brad dreamily heard the door to his suite open and close. The light touch of a hand on his neck almost made him yelp. He jerked off the headset, he twisted around. At first, he only saw a misty blue shape. His head tilted back, artificial eyes focusing in on the shimmering silk of a nearly transparent, gauzy sapphire negligee. Then, he saw it was clinging to a slender frame and the swell of small, high breasts. His gaze stopped at the outline of dark brown nipples, labido immediately reacting.
Angelique tossed her head and a long cascade of raven black hair spilled about her shoulders. Brad looked up, meeting her large, sapphire blue eyes. Ablaze with silver fire, they were immediately captivating, and communicating desire.
“Misses ... ah, Angelique?”
“Yes Brad.”
The accented, fluting voice was unmistakeable. He shifted uncomfortably, momentarily uncertain, wondering why she had slipped up on him this way, and what she wanted. A bit perplexed, he also puzzled over his ability to make out small details, like her arched, raven brows and a long, aquiline nose. Her wide mouth was curved in an inviting smile, the small tip of a very pink tongue licking her full, lower lip.
Somehow, his artificial eyes were giving much better resolution than expected. Her features were distinctive, exotic and sharply aristocratic, yet lovely. If not a Hollywood beauty, she was exceptional, and he couldn’t help but sense a magnetic attraction.
Brad inhaled, senses captivated by a delicate fragrance that seemed a blend of roses and feminine musk. Distractedly, he stared at her mouth, certain the red was natural, not enhanced by cosmetics. He followed the slow movement of her tongue as it traced moisture over both lips.
Long, raven lashes lowered and he saw a flash of eye-shadow, the pale blue matching the sapphire of her negligee.
“I tracked down the hacker,” he blurted, suddenly totally unnerved, drawn like a moth to flame, yet unsettled by her presence. He tried to remind himself that immortals no longer drank blood directly from the source, though many older European immortals still preferred that method. When he recalled that the widow was originally European, he felt an irrational desire to have her bite his neck.
“Yes, I received a phone call from the authorities before going to bed,” she replied, her voice rich with curious, enchanting trills. “That was excellent work on your part. Many hours of tedious effort.”
He nodded mutely, gulped air, then said, “I also locked down the vinyard server. All your terminals are completely secure. Now, all I have to do is install the new security equipment and...”
Her touch interrupted him, a soft palm cupping his chin and cheek, immediately cutting off his words.
“Not until tomorrow,” she murmured, thumb stroking across his cheekbone. “I am not here for that.” Brad shivered beneath the warmth of that contact. An electric jolt seemed to course through him. He still had a difficult time accepting that immortals were not cold, undead vampires, rather humans, their bodies saturated with bioengineered nanos. Angelique Cinnamon de Joliette-Castille, just call me Cinnamon, was very warm. In fact, the touch of her palm on his face seemed hot, radiating sensual energy. Her touch felt delicious and very disturbing.”Angelique?” he said nervously, all too aware of sizzling currents coursing through his groin.
“I like hearing you call me Cinnamon,” she murmured. “So very spicy. Similar to my grandmother’s ancient Egyptian name.” Her face bent closer, breath teasing his ear. “At dinner, I tried to read and control you Bradley,” she stated with a hint of amusement. “You know that I am one of the ancient immortals?”
“Yes,” he whispered, managing a slight nod.
“Well aside from being over three thousand years old, I am very powerful, but I couldn’t read you. Montcrief and Linda assured me that, to them, your mind was an open book. They also took pains to inform me that my thoughts and ... erotic hfeelings were broadcasting. They were leaking past my best attempts at shielding.
Her palm was very warm, and she smelled very inviting. In fact, the touch of her palm on his face felt hot, electric, delicious and oddly stimulating, but then, her words registered.
“Over three thousand years?”
“Yes, I am a very old immortal,” she replied with a quiet laugh.
For a moment, that bit of information didn’t register, then the implications hit him. “But, you were ... I mean, you already had a life mate!”
“Had is the operative word,” she agreed with a pleasant, throaty purr. “Since our dinner, I have been rather distracted. Taken to dreamy musings. Since your work here was important, I willed myself to leave you alone.”
“Leave me alone?” he whispered, then trembled, suddenly understanding, knowing full well why he had been sent out on a job that hardly required his level of expertise. “You ... can’t read me? Not at all?”
“Nor control you,” she said happily, a smile in her voice.
“But, this can’t be correct,” he said, not quite knowing why he suddenly felt disconcerted and totally out of his depth. Computers he could understand. People and emotions were something else... “Marguerite Note told me ... that you had lost your life-mate a long time ago.”
“Yes,” she replied simply. “Armond De Joliette-Castille. He was slain four hundred fifty years ago. We had been together nearly a millenia. I wanted to die. Threw myself into a fire and nearly perished. My children saved me. Friends helped tend me. They forced me to live. More recently, I have been sliding back into depression. Now, after our dinner, I have been experiencing hope, an opportunity for renewal, perhaps, in time even love.”
Brad sucked a breath. “Me?”
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