(The Original Story Concept)
This is an erotic fantasy. The characters and the situation are purely imaginary, and this story is NOT intended to be a guide for actual behavior. Any similarities between this story and actual people or actual events you should be ashamed of are purely coincidental. If it is illegal in your part of the world to access and read erotic fiction, or if you are underage, or if you don't like underage sex stories, then stop now.
This story is copyright 2004 and 2009 by Russell Hoisington. Please do not remove the author information or make any changes to this story. You may post freely to non-commercial (free) sites, or in the "free" area of commercial sites. That does not mean that these stories are in the public domain, nor does it mean that I give permission for you to use them in spam advertising. I reserve the right to determine what is "spam advertising" by my definition, not yours or anyone else's.
Thank you for your consideration.
Author's Cautionary Note
This is an experimental story, written to see if I could achieve certain goals as a writer. The previously posted version of this story is not what I'd intended. While I was in a snit, I added the final scene and then modified existing scenes to show Doug going mad. I was angry because some people didn't understand the original ending. I have lost all the copies of the original version, but I have attempted herein, within the limits of my memory, to bring the story back to its original concept.
I still CAUTION the reader that this is not my usual story, even though it no longer has what my editor calls "The Shakespearean Ending" (I think of it as "The Stephen King Ending"). If you are looking for a story like Wynter or April Showers, you will be disappointed and should move on.