As you may have guessed, this is the re-write of Charlotte's Movie. We'll call it "Charlotte Lite". It's basically the same story with a lot less raunchiness and a lot less of the redundant, tacked-on stroke scenes. This is the bare bones, essential story here. I cut it down to about half it's length. It's now about 700 pages long instead of the previous 1300 pages.
This is the version you'll want to recommend to your friends. All the squicky, dirtier elements are gone from it. It just a romantic story about two young people who have a whole lot of sex, make mistakes, and get through some of the toughest times of their lives.
Those who loved the original we'll be pleased to know it's still there. Let me know what you think of this version as well. I look forward to hearing from you.
PS. Acknowledgements to Gary Barber for his editing help.