The original version of this story was posted in Jan 2007 by "Hungry Guy", but he has told me it was really one of his earliest stories. He made a few updates, including a change of location to New York City and New Jersey, before posting it here at StoriesOnline. However, it was filled with British terms that would never have been used by anyone living and working in the United States. With Hungry Guy's permission, I Americanized the terms and the Gaelic names of the people, then started reworking the content, making it longer and breaking it into four chapters. Chapter 1 is a significant rework of his opening scene. Chapter 2 is nearly unchanged from his version except for terminology. Chapter 3 is mostly new material I added. Chapter 4 keeps some of his material but is mostly a replacement for his ending. The concept and much of the writing is his, and I would like to thank him for giving me permission to publish this version.