The Hand of an Old Man
by HppyHrryHrdn
Copyright© 2025 by HppyHrryHrdn
Flash Story: Flash story I wrote for a friend. Again, this is an even further departure from much of what I write. (Friend doesn't know I write erotica) It is a simple story with no sex or sexual overtones. Simple story of life, I enjoyed writing over two nights.
Tags: Fiction
Tom awoke to an empty bed and his whole body aching. Something felt off, though he couldn’t quite put his finger on why. Blurry-eyed, he stared up at the white-speckled ceiling, alone. His wife, Janet, had likely left the bed sometime in the night. When he got restless she would find solitude on the couch, where her short frame fit easily. She always kept a blanket draped over the back, and the throw pillow was less of a throw than a full-blown pillow.
Tom knew he should get up and moving. His hulking frame and nimble hands were needed at his beloved garage. He knew the whine of every air tool, the smell of black used oil being absorbed by cat litter, and he longed to get back to them. Two Camaros waited for him to raise them back up on the racks. One needed a new transmission to match the souped-up engine its owner wanted. Seven hundred horsepower should be enough for a car that would be driven only on public streets. The other, a black convertible, had hit a curb while avoiding a crash. The frame would need straightening, and the control arms and shocks replaced.
They were jobs his son could handle, but Tom felt compelled to oversee every part of the work He was as dedicated to the cars and the reputation of his garage as he was to his family. He said he worked so hard to give them a good life. If asked under sodium pentothal, he would admit it was a lie. He loved the work; he would have done it for free if his family were taken care of financially. As it was, he threw in lots of extras for his clients. Again: not for the client but for the love of the work and the car.
But, God, did he ache all over this morning. He vaguely remembered moving an empty V-6 from a Grand National. He liked the customer—Tom liked everybody—but the man was a moron, interested only in speed, not maintenance. The motor blew out the rings racing between streetlights one night. The wastegate failed to open and the driver kept his foot to the floor. A recipe for the car to end up with Tom.
“Dad it’s time to get up and get a move on.” It was a voice he recognized, urging him to get out of bed. But it wasn’t Janet’s. It should’ve been Janet coming in to give him their morning kiss, not a voice coming through the doorway. His son Tom Jr. stepped into the doorway, filling it. He looked older than he should have, but was still a hulk of a man. Tom knew his son was also the spitting image of himself. Only the voice was different. It had the same tone and tenor as John Goodman’s—he remembered that was why Tom Jr.’s friends called him Sully.
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