Constructive criticism is appreciated. Well, I have to thank Red Baron for hitting me over the head with a few things. He will be editing my stories for me. If anyone else wants to try it that would be great. I just want to send out a few stories people can read and enjoy without paying for them. I love telling adventure and action stories. If you have any ideas you would like for me to try, I might be able to incorporate in to a story let me know. I do not write pedo, trans, or homosexual stories. Almost all of my characters are considered Alphas (male or female). I hope you enjoy.